Bad Apple!! 8bit [OG Aniki Slayer Remix] (Hakulyte & Hateandhatred) - 5/10
- 31.435 - jack into a [34] chord seems a bit unnecessary here
- 33.494 - feels like more can be done to layer the wobble here
- 34.804 - ditto this with the pitch bend
- 35.740 - should be [24] to differentiate it from the chord before it (different pitch)
- 36.489 - jack makes sense, but I'd personally avoid using chords like [12] or [34] at the end of jacks because they're quite awkward to hit in general
- 42.667 - the colour change is welcome, though I think a change in pattern would also be nice too (e.g. 3412[134])
- 45.663 - not sure what justifies 64ths here
- 1:01.582 - you've used gluts for harsher sounds (e.g. 25.631) before compared to bass kicks, yet this is a straight [14] jumpjack, which is a harder pattern than the gluts that you've been using up to this point
- 1:13.564/1:25.545/etc - really not fond of the sudden use of [14] jumpjacks here -- the chart is already quite spiky in nature, and sandwiching these jumpjacks instead of jumpgluts with already difficult patterns makes this chart feel much more spiky than it already is
- 1:35.094 - missing burst given your layering scheme, though in general, I would probably use 32nd bursts for the main melody rather than the background noises instead
- 1:38.163/1:38.463 - not sure what the bursts are going to here
- 2:39.962 - this burst doesn't sound right at all, in that it shouldn't be there. the previous bursts make sense musically, but it also doesn't feel right since there are 2 clashing timbres here. just not sure what to feel about this section
- 2:42.583/2:42.770/2:43.613/2:47.732 - could have some bursts here
- 2:45.251 - funny burst, but I think it's way too soft to justify a burst like this
- 2:48.281 - not sure what that burst is going to
- 2:52.289 - burst shouldn't be here I think
- 2:51.289 to 2:51.664 - technically missed opportunity for a 5-note jack

I think I'll stop here, mostly because I think there are too many errors or that I have too many reservations with the chart to really accept this even if the rest of the chart is perfect. I see that there is a lot of tact put into the use of colours in the chart, but the chart suffers from a very uneven difficulty curve, lots of missed opportunities of evening out that difficulty curve by the use of more bursts, overly difficult jack patterns, and some gratuitous burst use overall. It's also a bit draggy overall, and I think it could afford a notable cut, but it might just be a song choice thing on my end.