Nocturne Ab Min No.2 :: FFR Batch Submission
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
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Rejected
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Nocturne Ab Min No 2 (MarioNintendo)" vs "Nocturne Ab Min No.2 (MarioNintendo)"
Simfile Folder Name
Nocturne Ab Min No 2 (MarioNintendo)
Note Count
1391
Chart Length
2:33
Average NPS
9.2425
Estimated Difficulty
69.82
First Note
0:02
Ending Note Delay
0:01
Hand Bias
Framers
0 - 0
1 - 0
2 - 0
3 - 25
4 - 76
Jumps
Hands
Quads
Color Jumps
Color Hands
Color Quads
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second
6 - 18.00 nps
0.5 Seconds
9 - 18.00 nps
1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps
2 Seconds
32 - 16.00 nps
5 Seconds
63 - 12.60 nps
10 Seconds
125 - 12.50 nps
30 Seconds
332 - 11.07 nps
1 Minute
625 - 10.42 nps
Color Count
Largest Note Gaps
1.93s1.37s0.97s0.97s0.97s0.6s0.57s0.5s
Posted at 5:38pm on October 28th, 2023
Nocturne Ab Min No 2 (MarioNintendo) [6.5/10]
>Perms & metadata good
>Sync sometimes questionable
2.642/14.293/14.413 - No jump?
5.044/15.374 - Why jump?
6.125 - Should be [3] to fit with the minijack noise of 6.245
16.095-16.335/19.939-20.179 - Should be [12][34][12] to avoid the unnecessary [3] jack. Also compare 17.056-17.296. Applies in later jumps
18.737 - Should be [13] to avoid having the same jump pattern as 18.978
20.900-21.140/21.860-22.101 - Shouldn’t this be all jumps? Compare 18.978-19.218
27.626-28.347/46.764-54.292/1:09.476-1:10.437/1:35.101-1:42.628/1:58.287-1:59.247 - Fix PR
29.067 - Should be [23] for better PR
36.995-38.797 - Fix PR. Also why are 36.995/37.235 jumps?
44.682-46.484/1:33.019-1:34.941 - The jumps are on the “downbeat” now? Compare 36.995-38.797
56.213-58.135/1:44.550-1:46.472/1:50.346-1:50.606/2:30.452 - Fix sync
1:00.177-1:02.269/1:48.454-1:50.606 - Optional, but would appreciate it if you made the trill transitions smoother by connecting them
1:02.009 - Sounds closer to 1:02.058
1:02.139 - Sounds closer to 1:02.123
1:13.080-1:15.242/2:01.888-2:04.048 - Why [4] anchor?
1:21.968-1:22.449/2:10.769-2:11.249 - Fix layering. Compare 33.632-34.112
1:25.332-1:27.133 - See comment at 36.995-38.797
2:15.810 - Should be [24] for better PR
>>For a piano piece, the PR here was surprisingly not that great
Posted at 5:39pm on October 28th, 2023
Nocturne Ab Min No.2
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- Permission, metadata good.
** Sync has problems. :( It'd be a bit of a complicated fix--the initial offset is wrong (about 30ms early), and the bpm is slow, so the sync drifts back into place and then out the other side. Adding to the complication, there are a couple of other bpm changes later, which put it closer to the right timing, but then it drifts out of sync again after each.
- Because of how far off the sync is, I'll give only very minimal timestamped feedback and stick instead to generalities. My main issue with this file is the anchoring (and, as a sort of sub-concern, the minijack use). A lot of the time, it's not at all clear to me what it goes to, if anything. See column 2 from 18.017-20.659 for an example of a long, confusing 8th anchor; the 12th column 1 anchor at 52.210 doesn't seem to make any PR sense; etc. As an example of minijack use, it's not clear to me why 16.095 gets so much tougher a pattern than 17.056, or most of the other similar sounds around it really.
- I also feel the trill patterns at 60.177 (and once again later) could be a bit more interesting, anchors could definitely work but there's a lot more PR stuff going on than the chart represents.
- Is this version still the file from the DF days? I see some nice ideas in it (the 24th streams are cool, for instance) but with the sync and sloppy anchoring it does feel like an early file, and one you might have synced without DDReam lol. Unfortunately would need some heavy revision for FFR, but it's cool to see you submit a file with this kind of history! [5/10]
Posted at 10:43pm on October 29th, 2023
Thanks for the detailed notes guys. Yes, indeed this is still the file from the DF days. Just a little trip down memory lane for you both. :) No worries, have a nice day!