Summer Boy (Xtreme2252) [7.5/10]
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- 0:00.463 There is a lot of PR in this section, but i find the patterning to be quite lacking. a good example is comparing this first trill jack to 0:03.129 which are the same pitch but different trills. or you could look at 0:04.463, which is quite a high pitch but gets a "lower" PR trill than 0:02.463. Another good example is 0:05.769. Simply move that first 16th to 1 and you have a 14 trill that feels like its ignoring PR. 0:07.796 has the same issue but with 23 I feel the PR of this section could really use an improvement. Maybe add in some 12 or 34 trills. With the long jacks in this chart, they should pose no issue.

- 0:05.463 this is the only time this instrument is layered. You introduce it layered here, then completely ignore it for the rest of the section. You should really be more consistent with this.

- 0:34.129, 1:20.796 This section feels really empty compared to the rest of the chart. I think its really the lack of snare notes here. Its an important enough sounds that you jack it often, for the difficulty height of the song, but its completely ignored in this section. I know its a calmer section, but it doesn't feel calm enough to ignore the notes. A simple stream with lighter layering would do the job just fine.

- 1:08.046 This note comes in noticeably late compared to the vocal. It feels like the 16th would be much more accurate.

- 2:07.129 the hands in this section just feel really out of place in this chart. Similar sounds have appeared early but dont get hands and now these sounds do. It also just doesn't feel like it warrants a hand with how the rest of the song it charted. Its the first time we see hands in this chart and suddenly they're everywhere. I think it would be better to just use jumps instead.

Oh boy! Another annoying song i get to sit though. The layering in this song can feel quite loose to the point where im not entirely sure whats going on everywhere, but it generally makes sense. Honestly my main issue with the song right now is the PR of the intro, and the random hands towards the end. Other than that its a decent file.