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Pause Balls (Waterflame Remix) :: FFR Batch Submission
Xtreme2252 -
Pause Balls (Waterflame Remix) -
Waterflame [5.75 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
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Waterflame blanket
Simfile Folder Name
Pause Balls (Waterflame Remix) (Xtreme2252)Note Count
689Chart Length
1:24Average NPS
8.8333Estimated Difficulty
59.75
First Note
0:06Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -19
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 7 3 - 19 4 - 29Jumps
x 206
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
14 - 14.00 nps 2 Seconds
26 - 13.00 nps 5 Seconds
61 - 12.20 nps 10 Seconds
118 - 11.80 nps 30 Seconds
313 - 10.43 nps 1 Minute
545 - 9.08 nps
Color Count
x 269 (39.04%)
x 245 (35.56%)
x 38 (5.52%)
x 126 (18.29%)
x 0 (0%)
x 10 (1.45%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 1 (0.15%)
Posted at 9:10pm on January 17th, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Offset changed: -0.033 => -0.030800
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Note Count changed: 643 => 642
AVG NPS changed: 8.24711 => 8.23077
Hand Bias changed: -3 => -10
Posted at 12:05am on April 24th, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Offset changed: -0.030800 => -0.031
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Note Count changed: 642 => 689
AVG NPS changed: 8.23077 => 8.83333
Hand Bias changed: -10 => -19
Posted at 5:39pm on October 28th, 2023
Pause Balls (Waterflame Remix) (Xtreme2252) [6.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
12.720 - Should be part of a minijack like the previous times
16.591 - Ghost note. Not a vocal
19.252 - Missing note. Compare 1:21.187
19.373-34.857 - Why did the 16th notes in the minijack become 24ths now? Why are some of the jumps near the minijacks gone now? On the plus side, at least you made this section look different from 3.889-15.502
35.522/37.458/etc - Ghost note
36.550 - Should be a jump at least
44.171 - Shouldn’t this be part of a minijack?
51.913 - Should this NOT be a minijack? Compare the voice section of 49.131-49.857. Do certain voices differ from each other by whether they get minijacks/no minijacks?
1:18.163/1:18.647/1:19.131 - Should be singles. Compare 16.228-17.437
>>Layering/PR needs to be more consistent
Posted at 5:39pm on October 28th, 2023
Pause Balls (Waterflame Remix)
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- Permission, metadata good.
** Sync is a bit early, change offset -0.031 -> -0.048. Timestamps given with this change made.
** Basically all of the 16th hi-hat stuff you're following is actually 24th swing, to the extent that the 16ths that *are* correctly synced are outliers. They do exist, though, e.g. 26.890 / 30.882 / etc. Since 12ths and 16ths are 40ms apart at this bpm, that error is very noticeable and will need to be fixed before this file is acceptable.
- 4.753 / 10.439: Why are these followed but not 6.689 / 8.624 / etc?
- 9.955: Column 2 is a bit heavy for no reason here.
- 16.245: Is the first minijack for vocals and the second for hi-hats? I'd suggest distinguishing these somehow, it is a bit confusing having two minijacks to such different sounds right next to each other.
- 18.665: Missing note.
- 26.648: Suggest [23] to reduce bias on the column with the minijack. Those are some of the tougher in the file, and while I feel they work, I also feel it's best not to make them any tougher than they need to be. Look through for other instances of this as well--there are several.
- 34.995: Ghost note.
** 35.479 / 37.536 / etc: These flams are significant misrhythms. They appear to go to chiptune blip, but that's a 32nd gallop (i.e. 2 notes) starting on the 8th, not a 32nd triplet ending on the 8th.
** Flams are also missing at 36.084, 36.568, etc.
** 36.689, 39.318, 40.560, etc.: What is this minijack for? No vocal or other repeated sound here. I find myself confused by a lot of the minijacks from here on out.
- 68.261: Watch column 2 bias.
- This file is held back by a few large-scale issues that are prevalent through big chunks of the file. There's definitely a foundation here, but it will need significant polishing to bring out its shine. [5/10]