Sun Killer :: FFR Batch Submission
storn42 - Sun Killer - Spiritbox [8.5 / 10]
Winter 2022 Seasonal Batch
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Released
from the album eternal blue released under rise records
jacks?

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Simfile Folder Name

Sun Killer (Storn42)

Note Count

1498

Chart Length

3:37

Average NPS

6.9815

Estimated Difficulty

75.39

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -16

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 197 4 - 126

Jumps

x 241

Hands

x 119

Quads

x 28

Color Jumps

x 28

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
30 - 15.00 nps 5 Seconds
60 - 12.00 nps 10 Seconds
113 - 11.30 nps 30 Seconds
299 - 9.97 nps 1 Minute
562 - 9.37 nps

Color Count

x 624 (41.66%)
x 410 (27.37%)
x 1 (0.07%)
x 389 (25.97%)
x 4 (0.27%)
x 10 (0.67%)
x 6 (0.4%)
x 36 (2.4%)
x 18 (1.2%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.47s2.3s1.8s1.67s1.37s1.27s1.27s1s
35
28
21
14
7

Sun Killer (Storn42) [9/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

42.761 & 43.212: These could maybe be jumpjacks with their preceding 4th, slightly underwhelming as is. (See next iteration too)

2:15.130: Could make this a (24)(13) 16ths and omit the 8th there to really emphasize these vocals and add a bit of variety to this 8ths rhythm.

Very solid chart. The intensity of the chart doesn't exactly match that of the song at times (8ths handgluts with quads can only do so much compared to 16ths jumpjacks and semi-longjacks), but the song is still showcased nicely. It also brings a unique and fun aspect with the jacks without being overkill.

Sun Killer (Storn42) [8/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

18.288/25.506/26.859 - Ghost note on the non-jack portion
42.874 - Missing jump. Vocal
2:07.686/2:08.814 - Hand. Vocal inflection. Compare 2:06.33
2:24.603-2:39.040 - Felt weird that the main vocals had no impact during the section. Maybe shift the lane on where the minijacks go every time a syllable progresses (e.g. “Sun-Kill-Er” would be something like 22-33-44)
3:04.305 - Should be [12]. No more jack noise
3:06.560-3:30.921 - What noise are these 4th singles going to?
3:34.756 - Should be jump. Not a snare

>>Straightforward & consistent. Quite the silly file you have here

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1496 => 1498
AVG NPS changed: 6.97219 => 6.98151
Hand Bias changed: -10 => -16

@op

42.761 & 43.212: These could maybe be jumpjacks with their preceding 4th, slightly underwhelming as is. (See next iteration too)
- I dont think that really makes sense. The only thing i would really want jumps for here would maybe be the toms, but it just feels a bit too much for how calm the song is here.

2:15.130: Could make this a (24)(13) 16ths and omit the 8th there to really emphasize these vocals and add a bit of variety to this 8ths rhythm.
- you know what, i'll just add the 16th and just jack it :)

@ositz

18.288/25.506/26.859 - Ghost note on the non-jack portion
- Those notes are accurate. they are each a new note on the fun delay thing.

42.874 - Missing jump. Vocal
- i'd argue the vocal is actually at 43.100

2:07.686/2:08.814 - Hand. Vocal inflection. Compare 2:06.33
- i know its a bit arbitrary but i dont feel those are worth the hand.

2:24.603-2:39.040 - Felt weird that the main vocals had no impact during the section. Maybe shift the lane on where the minijacks go every time a syllable progresses (e.g. “Sun-Kill-Er” would be something like 22-33-44)
- I can understand where you're coming from but moving the jack is out of the question. That would kind of take away the main gimmick of the chart, being the really long jack anchor. I could also add jumps for vocals but i really want to have the chart build up with the section, and i just dont think the whispering is worth it. Considering the jacks line up with the vocals anyways, i think its fine for the section to stay as is.

3:04.305 - Should be [12]. No more jack noise
- the [124] is more for emphasis.

3:06.560-3:30.921 - What noise are these 4th singles going to?
- random cymbals that happen on every 4th (except when they dont)

3:34.756 - Should be jump. Not a snare
- Its just there for some extra emphasis on the last note.

Also I changed the section at 2:22.348 a bit for better patterning.