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Yominokuni Anthem :: FFR Batch Submission
jacobvl39 -
Yominokuni Anthem -
NanosizeMir [6.75 / 10]
Winter 2022 Seasonal Batch
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https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1DJQLrSgfPhxSIH1-rDS_Nwzxm9sektgrZr2ESC-N3dk/edit#gid=991684842 released on IOSYS album メイド・イン・きゅんクチュアリ☆. The official song title is 黄泉国賛歌
An exciting study in flams. I made a few small cuts to avoid repetitive parts.
Simfile Folder Name
Yominokuni Anthem (jacobvl39)Note Count
2285Chart Length
3:26Average NPS
11.3493Estimated Difficulty
80.81
First Note
0:05Ending Note Delay
0:02Hand Bias
x 87
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 10 3 - 14 4 - 71Jumps
x 594
Hands
x 61
Quads
x 8
Color Jumps
x 23
Color Hands
x 2
Color Quads
x 8
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
42 - 21.00 nps 5 Seconds
85 - 17.00 nps 10 Seconds
150 - 15.00 nps 30 Seconds
389 - 12.97 nps 1 Minute
721 - 12.02 nps
Color Count
x 1106 (48.4%)
x 657 (28.75%)
x 59 (2.58%)
x 258 (11.29%)
x 53 (2.32%)
x 59 (2.58%)
x 64 (2.8%)
x 29 (1.27%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 11:04am on November 13th, 2023
Yominokuni Anthem (jacobvl39) [6.5/10]
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
7.728: The 12ths are super dominant here, the 24ths are probably not necessary. Feels out of place.
9.887 & 12.510 & 15.133 & 17.756 & 1:35.133 & 1:37.756 & 1:40.379... : 24ths, not 16ths.
13.575-14.067: Bit weird PR, would expect left for the first 3 flams and right for the last one.
16.499: This timing is slightly odd.
30.297-33.903: The abstract charting of the wubs here feels really strange; the slowdowns on very short rolls doesn't quite work imo because it simply doesn't play like slowdowns but rather semi-arbitrarily timed rolls.
57.510: Missing note.
59.313-59.969: This is 24ths swing, not 16ths.
1:01.608: Sounds like it should be much more than just 16ths, like a 32nds roll or something.
1:21.280-1:22.264: Not 16ths all the way. There are missing 24ths in here and ghost notes too.
1:22.592-1:22.920: Not 16ths.
1:25.707-1:26.526: Bit unnecessarily rough on the left hand.
1:58.493: Missing note.
2:17.838: I can't quite hear those 24ths. Maybe fine but they're definitely super subtle.
2:18.985 & 2:19.641: Could be (24) for example, the percussion is quite distinct from 2:18.657.
2:23.657: Missing note, drums.
2:33.466: Another strange burst timing.
3:02.674-3:02.838: Jumps?
Cute chart for the most part. Overall feels a bit too gimmicky due to the abstract bursts which are slightly odd to play and the major PR sacrifice for the repeated jumps during vocals. The second half is also very close to a full repeat of the first one. There's potential, but for now it needs a bit more work.
Posted at 8:41pm on November 13th, 2023
Yominokuni Anthem (jacobvl39) [7/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
2.592-2.646 - Why is this 48th flams when 2.264-2.373 are 24th flams? This comment applies to later similar sections
3.575-3.958 - Technically different pitch than 2.264-2.646
5.870-5.980 - Do [14]23 for higher pitch compared to 5.215-5.324
10.952 - Move to [3] for higher pitch compared to 11.280
13.411-14.067/etc - Where’s the rest of the jumps? This comment applies to later similar sections
14.395-16.362/etc - Why do the blue 8ths have jumps? Compare 8.821-11.444. This comment applies to later similar sections
17.674-18.001 - Not gonna step the 32nd roll in the background?
28.165-28.493/etc - 32nds in the background. This comment applies to later similar sections
40.788 - Why should this be at [4]? Compare 19.805
45.829 - Sounds closer to 45.788
47.674 - Should be jump
51.444 - This shouldn’t be part of the [3] jack since it’s the only note here that has vocal and no kick
52.756-53.288 - Do ascending PR on the triplets
54.067-58.001 - What’s the layering here?
1:02.919 - Why jump?
1:03.657-1:03.944 - Not even slowing down the song gave a clue as to what sounds these notes were going to. At the moment, there’s both a few missing notes and ghost notes
1:11.772-1:18.207 - What are these 32nds going to?
1:14.231 - Fix PR. Not same noise as 1:14.067
1:15.215-1:15.624 - Probably more fitting as singles since it’s not as loud as 39.641-40.215
1:19.641 - Why no jump?
1:24.559-1:24.614 - Should at least be 124 to reflect the ascending PR
1:32.756-1:33.849 - Can do PR here
1:36.198 - See comment on 10.952
1:43.903-1:44.477 - The background 16ths have to be addressed. Either layer in the 16ths, or add something to the flams to express this additional noise
2:30.297-2:30.324 - Make this not 12/21 to differentiate itself from the flam noise of 2:30.625-2:31.308
2:31.608 - No flams? Compare 2:29.969-2:30.024
2:31.936-2:32.155 - Fix flam PR
2:33.412-2:33.493 - Slightly off-sync? Compare 2:32.100-2:32.155
2:51.936-2:52.319 - Fix flam PR
>>Kinda straightforward & consistent, yet this file would benefit a lot from better PR and Layering