Theme Park :: FFR Batch Submission
jacobvl39 - Theme Park - Snail's House [7.5 / 10]
Winter 2022 Seasonal Batch
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https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1DJQLrSgfPhxSIH1-rDS_Nwzxm9sektgrZr2ESC-N3dk/edit#gid=991684842 released on IOSYS album バズリズシ ~I/O/P SELECTED vol.04~
Slightly "abstract" approach here as some of the synths don't lend themselves to clean layering, but we'll see how it goes

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Theme Park (jacobvl39)

Note Count

880

Chart Length

1:56

Average NPS

7.9831

Estimated Difficulty

56.58

First Note

0:06

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -12

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 2

Jumps

x 208

Hands

x 38

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
28 - 14.00 nps 5 Seconds
57 - 11.40 nps 10 Seconds
102 - 10.20 nps 30 Seconds
279 - 9.30 nps 1 Minute
533 - 8.88 nps

Color Count

x 384 (43.64%)
x 432 (49.09%)
x 6 (0.68%)
x 19 (2.16%)
x 6 (0.68%)
x 33 (3.75%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.57s1.37s1.03s0.87s0.7s0.53s0.53s0.53s
35
28
21
14
7

An attempt was made to clean up the layering

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 897 => 909
AVG NPS changed: 8.13728 => 8.24614
Hand Bias changed: -19 => -3

Theme Park (jacobvl39) [8/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

14.806-25.151: The 4ths jumps here are confusing. Nothing really seems to justify the longer strings of identical 4th jumps (vs the varied ones), either musically or motif-wise.

24.634 & 24.979: Pretty soft sounds for an added layer here.

25.065: Maybe done on purpose, but this is more of a missing note. Would help make the transition clearer to the next section. If included though, would have to check for other occurrences in the song.

34.634: What is this jump for?

37.392: Single? The layering is quite unclear in this whole section. Why does this get a jump, but not 38.082 for example?

42.910: Why a note here, but not at 43.599?

1:08.944: It's now the 3rd roll going to the vocals, yet none are the same structure. See 46.875 and 57.910.

1:21.530: 3rd (12) 8th in a row, PR.

1:31.013: Another roll, check for consistency.

While the layering didn't seem too intuitive in the first third or so, things got much clearer and more consistent from there until the end; a good clean up pass and this should be lovely. PR could be improved here and there but nothing too noticeable. Good stuff.

Theme Park (jacobvl39) [7/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

3.082 - Move to [14] for better PR
5.841 - Move to 4
10.496 - Move to [12]
24.461-24.634 - Change to [23][14]
25.086 - Missing note. RecordScratch
25.151-42.220 - I suggest this layering scheme for this section: If Harmonica present, then do PR. If Harmonica not present, then stick to one lane through 8th anchors (the Hands should be away from the anchor lane for less awkward patterning)
26.703 - Missing note
43.255/43.599/43.686/43.944/44.375 - Missing note
46.875-47.134 - How is a 24th triplet and a 32nd triplet supposed to represent the dump-age of this vocal here?
48.255 - Missing note
55.496-56.530 - The jumps should be descending
56.703 - Should be single
57.910-58.082 - This is technically 32nds. I’m fine with 24ths as the nerfed pattern
58.168/59.289 - Missing note
59.461 - Shouldn’t this jump be the same as the next two jumps? Compare 48.427-48.944
1:00.668-1:00.711 - Should be 34. Compare 49.634-49.677
1:06.530-1:07.565 - See comment on 55.496-56.530
1:07.737 - See comment on 56.703
1:09.174 - Sounds closer to 1:09.203
1:13.082 - Missing note
1:13.599 - Should have a different jump pattern than 1:13.255. Different pitch
1:18.772 - See comment on 56.703
1:20.194 - Ghost note
1:20.841-1:21.530 - Fix the PR on these three [12]’s
1:26.358-1:27.048 - Fix the PR on these three jumps
1:31.272 - Missing note
1:31.358-1:31.703 - I suggest [123]4[13]

>>Kinda straightforward & consistent

Thanks for the feedback, I haven't been active lately but I will try to get make some updates soon.

Wondering what the situation is on this file, as it has been over a month to submit and receive fixes. Assuming notes have been acknowledged at a minimum since notes have been responded to so I could let it in, just double-checking and giving it a little bit more time before I do so.

I forgot about this one for a while and then assumed it was too late to make fixes. I can try to make the recommended fixes within the next few days if it's okay with you

Do what you need to do.

Thanks for your patience. Layering has been improved based on judge suggestions.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 909 => 880
AVG NPS changed: 8.24614 => 7.98307
Hand Bias changed: -3 => -12