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Pandora :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo -
Pandora -
SOMON [8 / 10]
Winter 2022 Seasonal Batch
PublicEvents
Rejected
https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=153&event=137
BMS Open Source Blanket Permissions
Simfile Folder Name
Pandora (WirryWoo)Note Count
1097Chart Length
2:10Average NPS
8.7202Estimated Difficulty
70.33
First Note
0:04Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -77
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 58 4 - 16Jumps
x 222
Hands
x 23
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
20 - 20.00 nps 2 Seconds
33 - 16.50 nps 5 Seconds
69 - 13.80 nps 10 Seconds
135 - 13.50 nps 30 Seconds
363 - 12.10 nps 1 Minute
560 - 9.33 nps
Color Count
x 388 (35.37%)
x 260 (23.7%)
x 16 (1.46%)
x 401 (36.55%)
x 0 (0%)
x 19 (1.73%)
x 0 (0%)
x 13 (1.19%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 10:27pm on November 11th, 2022
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1095 => 1096
AVG NPS changed: 8.69508 => 8.70763
Hand Bias changed: -77 => -76
Posted at 9:19pm on November 14th, 2022
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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AVG NPS changed: 8.70763 => 8.71224
Posted at 6:53pm on November 19th, 2022
Fixed colors and hand usage.
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1096 => 1097
AVG NPS changed: 8.71224 => 8.72019
Hand Bias changed: -76 => -77
Posted at 9:12pm on August 20th, 2023
Pandora (WirryWoo) [8/10] -FR-
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
13.744-14.793: Could mirror this entirely for better PR.
34.880: 32nd here, arguable for layering.
38.289: PR suggestion: (34)(12)(34) (23)(14)(23) (24)(13)(24) (12)(34)(12) (24).
46.681 [FR]: These 32nds are very subtle for the difficulty spike they cause (especially relative to the intensity of the song compared to the second half for example). There are clear drum notes that could be layered instead while still keeping the climax of the section. For example the three notes starting on 46.681, 46.996 (arguably with 47.101) & the 47.310 triplet (which you already have) are quite audible and could be the main focus of the section.
1:06.633-1:07.679 [FR]: This is off sync and the second to last note is a ghost note.
1:16.887-1:18.565: Original approach, nice one.
1:21.293: Missing jump.
1:34.719: See 1:21.293. A single could be argued if the goal is to lower the difficulty of these parts, but should be consistent.
1:39.964-1:40.698: Bit left-hand heavy and forces the single note on 1:40.698 due to the patterning. Consider repatterning; the 32nds roll could also be something like 12432 to accommodate without sacrificing anything.
1:47.097: These are fine as there's not much else to chart, the intensity is high and the patterning/transitions are friendly enough.
1:48.356: Ghost note. Consequentially, 1:48.659 could go on column 4 for added impact and PR.
Pretty fun chart overall. The motifs for the repeating melody are catchy. Minor things here and there, but the first 32nds spike and the vocals off sync part need to be looked at.
Posted at 9:18pm on August 20th, 2023
Pandora (WirryWoo) [8/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
14.216 - Unsure if omitted to avoid trill into hand
20.352/20.510 - Missing note
21.821 - Shouldn’t be part of a minijack
26.436/27.066 - Missing note
33.569/34.408 - Could do a minijack w/ this
47.258/47.468 - Missing note
1:03.690-1:04.730 - Chicken Disaster
*1:08.705-1:20.558 - What are these minijacks going to? If you’re focusing on the synth, then omit the blue 8ths. At least the minijacks after this section make sense since there’s some minijack noise to it (hi-hat/psytrance)
1:21.293/1:34.719 - Missing jump. Kick
1:48.356 - Ghost note, assuming that the melody is the focus here
*1:52.342-2:05.873 - See comment on 1:08.705-1:20.558
>>Straightforward & consistent. See asterisk
Posted at 5:33pm on December 1st, 2023
Wondering what the status of this submission is at, since it is past the 1 month probationary period to submit changes and fixes, and there has been no acknowledgement of notes or fixes submitted. In order for us to accept this file and have it released in FFR, it needs certain fixes addressed by the Judges, and acknowledgement of notes in order for us to continue.
Will check back on this later. If it still hasn't received fixes or at least a response, it could risk being rejected.
Posted at 5:21pm on April 15th, 2024
Moved to rejected, received no responses. Please resubmit to a later batch if fixes happen to be made.