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Dis Dancehall Ting Is Better Than That T.V. Ting Tony :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 -
Dis Dancehall Ting Is Better Than That T.V. Ting Tony -
Shitmat [8.25 / 10]
Winter 2022 Seasonal Batch
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Let me know if layering the melody with the 20ths was a bad idea. Shitmat - is in the "Permissions List and Information v8" thread.
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Simfile Folder Name
Dis Dancehall Ting Is Better Than That T.V. Ting Tony (ositzxz369)Note Count
3149Chart Length
4:31Average NPS
11.8265Estimated Difficulty
87.64
First Note
0:05Ending Note Delay
0:02Hand Bias
x 17
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 12 3 - 48 4 - 115Jumps
x 628
Hands
x 51
Quads
x 1
Color Jumps
x 5
Color Hands
x 1
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
38 - 19.00 nps 5 Seconds
79 - 15.80 nps 10 Seconds
153 - 15.30 nps 30 Seconds
424 - 14.13 nps 1 Minute
773 - 12.88 nps
Color Count
x 1159 (36.81%)
x 843 (26.77%)
x 110 (3.49%)
x 561 (17.82%)
x 110 (3.49%)
x 74 (2.35%)
x 15 (0.48%)
x 14 (0.44%)
x 263 (8.35%)
Posted at 1:06pm on January 18th, 2024
Dis Dancehall Ting Is Better Than That T.V. Ting Tony (ositzxz369) [7.5/10] -FR-
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
58.312-59.018: Consider 48ths, this feels a bit underwhelming for how glitchy and prominent it is.
59.018: This (and maybe the 16th too) should probably be a jump.
1:18.783-1:32.900: This whole section feels pretty unintuitive in terms of layering. Can't hear what 1:19.753 and its 32nd go to, what the jump at 1:22.224 is, and then there's 1:26.636 but not 1:26.989 or 1:27.165? Just confusing in general.
1:32:900-1:54.077: The 4321 rolls in this section should be 24ths (compare for example 1:41.018 vs 2:05.371, the latter being correct 16ths) and sound much more "trilly" than "rolly" because the 16ths (24ths*) are the same note.
2:20.106: Bit odd to have the 16th on the same hand as the 24ths minitrill here. Nbd though.
2:29.371: This is more of a big deal; the forced minijack 1(12) is quite spiky for what's going on.
2:46.312: This is an even bigger deal wtf lol. The scream is a constant sound and while the stab here is loud, nothing warrants minijacks. Just nerf it to a hand with no minijacks. 2:47.724 is fine given the percussions leading to it.
3:28.665: Why is the trilliness going away here?
3:57.253: From here until the end the non-20ths notes sound quite off and don't feel great at all to play.
Pretty nice chart with fun motifs here and there like the 24ths rolls and the 20ths abstractions. The execution on the spikes is noticeably off though given that the chart is long and there are many loud/intense sections with just friendly js or even simple 16ths streams. The spikes wouldve been less of an issue if the general layering was more intense with more jumps/hands and whatnot but as is it definitely needs a nerf to not feel like 90% of the chart is filler. Most of the chart aside from that is fun and flows well, so FR it is.
Spikes to nerf for FR: 1:42.783 (arguable), 2:28.665 (must), 2:45.253 (absolutely must), 3:50.900 (arguable), ending (arguable depending on fix).
Posted at 1:09pm on January 18th, 2024
39.518: the repeated sound here is nearly prominent enough to justify a minijack. it's questionable whether it should even be charted at all
58.842: not something to change but the hard left pan with the notes on the right columns is really trippy 😂
9/10: couldn't find any errors other than the one i pointed out
Posted at 8:09pm on January 20th, 2024
58.842 - K, moved notes to left pan
1:19.753 - A small Snare Rush here
1:22.224 - At this moment, the jumps go to the vocals (jump in THE lawn??). Dunno the actual lyrics, but it's the 3rd word "THE" in that repeated phrase
1:26.636/1:26.989/1:27.165 - There's a mix of the descending motif of A-B-C-D-EF and the repeating drum pattern of A-B-A-B-A-B-A--C. 1:26.636 is part of the descent. 1:26.989/1:27.165 is nothing because it's neither part of the descent nor the drum.
1:32.900-1:54.077 - When you say "the 4321 rolls should be 24ths", do you mean constant 24ths? Because I now see it as a slight 24th swing instead. Also it's not a trill; I'm doing it as a descending roll since this entire section keeps repeating the descent melody
2:29.371 - K, omitted the last 20th to avoid the minijack
2:46.312 - K, nerfed it to a hand. Please recheck 2:45.253-2:46.665
3:28.665 - I was straying away from trills b/c the percussion got really loud - to which I wanted to use different patterns to signify that. But if doing all trills is the correct move here, then I'll do that
Also, recheck the 4 FR'd Spike sections; I've omitted some 20ths and nerfed the inner jumps into singles. Also, what timestamp do u mean when u say "ending (arguable depending on fix)"?
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 3167 => 3149
AVG NPS changed: 11.89409 => 11.82649
Hand Bias changed: 15 => 17
Posted at 8:47pm on January 20th, 2024
Looks really solid now. Great job.