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behind you :: FFR Batch Submission
QwertyVibin -
behind you -
Akimalo [7.5 / 10]
Winter 2022 Seasonal Batch
PublicTokenPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4782258&postcount=384
Simfile Folder Name
behind you (QwertyVibin)Note Count
794Chart Length
1:19Average NPS
10.3565Estimated Difficulty
68.77
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -12
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 115Jumps
x 226
Hands
x 1
Quads
x 1
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
30 - 15.00 nps 5 Seconds
68 - 13.60 nps 10 Seconds
128 - 12.80 nps 30 Seconds
359 - 11.97 nps 1 Minute
661 - 11.02 nps
Color Count
x 408 (51.39%)
x 281 (35.39%)
x 0 (0%)
x 105 (13.22%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 9:58am on August 29th, 2023
Behind you (QwertyVibin) [8/10]
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
18.951: The rolls don't really match the song too well. Consider something like 4323(14)213(24)
20.801: For better PR, do (14)(14)4 here. 22.851 does it well.
22.476: Ghost note.
23.901: Move to col 2, not same note as the preceding 4th. See 33.501 for example.
24.801: (12) here, not the same as the preceding (23).
28.851: Just a suggestion, but here a 43432 would break from the 2-hand stuff to emphasize the fade-in.
29.901: No big deal, but better to not have this 8th on the same column at the 8th jack that follows it.
35.001: Nothing really justifies the change here. Should either be (13)(13) or (23)(23).
39.651 & 40.851 & 42.051, etc: Inconsistent with the intro where the piano notes are jumps.
57.351: Same concern as 18.951. Something like 1232(14)342(13).
1:00.801: (23) here.
1:05.601: Same as 1:00.801. Could be (34) for variety.
1:05.901: Same concern as 29.901.
1:07.101: Here, moving to column 3 could be justified to have the following 16ths be 12123 to match 28.851. (Would need to slightly adapt the PR on the following 8ths)
1:15.051: (24) or something, not jumpjack.
Super cute chart. Most notes are suggestions to really polish the motifs. Good job there.
Posted at 10:07am on August 29th, 2023
behind you (QwertyVibin) [7/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
9.501-9.651 - Why minijack?
14.151 - Should be jump
17.301-17.750 - Why jump? No kick
18.951-19.176 - Fix PR. Compare 18.651-18.875
19.701 - Move to 4 for minijack noise
20.601-20.901 - Should be [14][14]4
21.501 - Move to 2 to avoid unintentional minijack
22.251 - Please use a different jump pattern from 21.951 (something that isn’t [13])
23.901 - Move to 2
24.801 - I suggest changing this to [12] for better jack PR
25.851-26.451 - I suggest [13]4[12]431[23]
28.101 - Move to 4
29.151-29.301 - I suggest [23]3
29.751 - Move to 3
30.051-30.501 - Maybe make the jack go on the 1 lane so it doesn’t collide with the 3 lane of the previous nearby 16ths
31.251 - Move to [24]
32.151 - Move to 4
33.951-34.101 - I suggest [14]4 b/c right now the [2] lane is colliding with the minijack noise and the non-minijack noises
35.001-35.151 - These two jumps need to be the same jump pattern, see the previous times you’ve done this type of pattern
36.051 - Move to [34]
36.801 - Move to [34]
39.538 - Missing note
49.951-49.101/50.151-50.301/51.351-51.501/52.551-52.701 - Why minijack?
52.701 - Move to 2
55.701-56.151 - Why jump? No kick
57.051-1:15.576 - Basically apply everything I pointed out from “18.651-37.251” to this entire section
1:15.651-1:16.101 - Fix PR. Compare 37.251-37.701
1:16.701 - Why hand? Compare 38.451, which at least had a special explosion noise
>>Layering is good, but I’m surprised you weren’t consistent with the song’s theme of vocal minijacks (which was your intent to begin with, shown from 22.851-23.301 for example)
Posted at 5:14pm on December 1st, 2023
Wondering what the situation is on this file, as it has been over a month to submit and receive fixes, and no acknowledgement of judge notes have been submitted, despite the "Change Recommended" flag on the file, which at a bare minimum, requires ticking the box to "acknowledge judge notes" on the bottom of this page where notes are.
Posted at 5:57pm on January 21st, 2024
Moving to rejected. If fixes happen to be applied, or wish to submit in the future, please re-submit to a currently open batch.