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GREMLIN :: FFR Batch Submission
Velocity -
GREMLIN -
kanoryo [6.75 / 10]
Aug/Sept 2022
PublicTokenPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
BMS Permission: https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=382&event=133
Simfile Folder Name
GREMLIN (Velocity)Note Count
1343Chart Length
2:11Average NPS
10.4949Estimated Difficulty
72.81
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 33
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 9 4 - 114Jumps
x 356
Hands
x 6
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
76 - 15.20 nps 10 Seconds
145 - 14.50 nps 30 Seconds
391 - 13.03 nps 1 Minute
689 - 11.48 nps
Color Count
x 409 (30.45%)
x 336 (25.02%)
x 0 (0%)
x 425 (31.65%)
x 1 (0.07%)
x 153 (11.39%)
x 11 (0.82%)
x 6 (0.45%)
x 2 (0.15%)
Posted at 8:57pm on June 1st, 2023
GREMLIN (Velocity) [7/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.
- 0:00.490-0:06.751 The intro to the song has a 3/4 feel to it. I'd recommend changing the bpm of this section to 76.666 to match the feel.
- 0:08.577 The rhythm here doesn't seem quite right. This is what i'm hearing: https://i.imgur.com/9kMn9jf.png
- 0:15.294 there are a lot of these 32nds in this section that are missed in the chart such at 0:17.120. it might be a better idea to ignore them in this section since its pretty calm anyways.
- 0:26.186 why not jumps like 0:34.533
- 0:34.403 missing jump for kick?
- 1:05.186 the notes fail to actually follow the vocals here. also bonus points if you color them white for the whisper :)
- If im right that notes like 1:07.557 are cyan because of lack of melody, then other notes like 1:09.620 and 1:11.707 should also be colored.
- 1:07.273 The jumps here feel arbitrarily placed and seem to lack any real structure.
- 1:15.620 Are you sure the streams here are 32nds? they sound closer to 24ths to me. I'd also double check what notes are charted cus im not 100% sure its accurate. The gap at 1:16.664 sounds like it should have notes for example.
- 1:26.055 I'm not a huge fan of whats going on here. The chart feels a bit underwhelming. I would personally chart the 8ths as jumps as that feels more appropriate to the music. 1:29.968 is especially odd being a single note. i would a expect a jump or even a hand here as its similar to 1:29.186
- 1:30.229 It gets worse here. The chart doesn't feel like its building up and seems especially empty. I would suggest a 16th stream following the rising synth, potentially even 32nds at 1:31.925.
- 1:32.316 The jumps here feel like a bit much considering the soft attacks of the organ. suggest tuning down to single notes.
- 1:49.012 shouldn't this be a jump like 1:49.533?
Seriously double check the layering consistency of the whole chart. I'm sure there's plenty of stuff i've missed or left out.
Posted at 9:00pm on June 1st, 2023
GREMLIN (Velocity) [6.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
7.012/9.490 - Ghost note. Not part of the stepped main melody
21.881 - Should be single. Compare 20.838
22.142 - Should be single. Compare 20.968-21.229
22.403-22.599 - Maybe change this trill to 2323 so as to differentiate from 22.794-22.860
25.794 - Missing jump. Compare 25.533
26.577-29.577 - No minijack/anchoring for these tick noises?
34.403/48.751/49.794 - Missing jump
51.294/51.425/51.555 - Ghost note
52.860 - Should be single
52.925 - Should be jump
53.055 - Should be single
55.533-59.707 - What’s up with the lack of jumps on the blue 8ths?
1:07.577-1:15.620 - What’s up with the jump layering here? If it’s on the background violin, then there should be more jumps in this section
1:15.620-1:21.881 - Consider using 24ths to dump the long flute noises instead of 32nds as a way to differentiate from 1:03.099-1:04.142
1:30.229-1:32.316 - You forgot to step this entire speedup section!
1:32.316-1:33.620 - What are these jumps going to?
1:35.186-1:40.142 - What’s up with the inconsistent 16th jumps?
1:46.533/1:46.794 - Ghost note. Not part of stepped main melody
1:49.012 - Missing jump
1:51.490/1:53.577/1:54.620/1:57.751/1:58.794/1:59.838/2:02.968 - Should be single
2:08.186 - Should be jump
2:08.316 - Should be single
>>Not straightforward and consistent