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- 0:10.106 the broken streams here seem odd to me. The background percussion is going full 16ths and this no longer follows the melody either. I feel like the 16ths at 0:08.906 are a good lead-in and would make sense to just go full 16th stream from here. I understand you may be trying to build up the chart with the increasing volume of the percussion, but i dont think broken rhythms is the way to go.

- 0:13.106 maybe move this to 2 since there is already a pretty lengthy anchor on 4

- 0:38.506 please go back and resync the notes to the vocals here. They are EXTREMELY offbeat in some places. 0:39.306 or 0:42.106 being a great example. You do this at 0:48.556 you should do this for the rest of the section as well.

- why are 1:17.706 and 1:20.906 completely different patterns when they are basically the same sound. The only real difference is the pitch. I wont lie, the minijacks also feel a bit out of place. The chart is pretty much entirely 16th streams so to see minijacks like this, and its the only section with them is a bit odd. Not to mention that i'd argue the more intense sound is given an easier pattern. Personally i would get rid of the minijacks, and replace them with trills like you do the other sounds. Then if you still want to represent the slightly more intense trills you could change them to 12 or 34 trills to mimic the intensity in gameplay.

- 1:21.706, 1:28.106 whats with the 8th jumps here? Its quite random and inconsistent with the rest of the chart. nowhere else do you give the melody jumps. notes like 1:17.506 are the same sound but this isn't a jump while 1:21.906 is. It just seems really inconsistent to me.

- 1:30.106 shouldn't this be a jump? also whats with the random hand at 1:30.306?

- 1:40.106 this breaks the set rules of trills for this sound despite being identical to all the other trills

** 1:42.506 Honestly i feel the chart should end here. Of the nearly 2 minutes left in the chart, only about 30 seconds of it is challenging and the rest is filler. I also just dont think the remaining chart is very good.

- 2:08.106 PR wise i think a 134 hand would make more sense, especially to contrast the higher 2:11.306

- 2:43.306 Whats with the random spike in difficulty. This section feels like a completely different chart. In a file thats been mostly light 16th jumpstreams the sudden dense JS here is really out of place, especially when compared to the same section at 1:10.506.

- 2:46.606 why is there a random 16th here?

- 2:46.706 I really dont understand the need to use constant 8th jumps. The jumps feel out of place and really dont go at all with the music. Once again this is entirely different from 1:16.906 despite being an extremely similar section. This feels like the section was made dense just to make it hard, but instead we get a large difficulty spike at the end of the file that doesn't really feel justified. We lose out on that strong 4th beat for the kicks and instead are given jump gluts uncharacteristic of the rest of the file.

- 2:46.806 if you wanted a good opportunity to use minijacks this is the place. The quick 2 note rhythm would be better represented with a minijack and would feel closer to the 2 note pulse, instead of an implied 3 note pusle with the current charting.

- 2:52.006 Another section very similar to an earlier section but charted completely differently. suddenly its a jumptrill when previously it was just a trill. why are they even jumps when this sound is never represented with jumps elsewhere. You also miss out with 2:52.006 not being a jump. This entire section feels completely overcharted and unnecessary.

This chart is really frontloaded in terms of action. the first 1:40 does a good job at holding the players attention but the rest of the song then starts to drag with how slow and trivial it is. What content is there at the end is overly difficult, Overcharted, and unjustified. I think the front half of the file Is actually quite nice and should be fun to play, but its dragged down by the 2nd half of the file. This chart desperately needs a cut. Personally I would cut it directly at 1:42.506 and, if your feeling up to it, cut to 3:12.106 for a nice outro.

FR - Please cut the ending of the song.

Wondering what the status of this submission is at, since it is past the 1 month probationary period to submit changes and fixes, and there has been no acknowledgement of notes or fixes submitted. In order for us to accept this file and have it released in FFR, it needs certain fixes addressed by the Judges, and acknowledgement of notes in order for us to continue.

Will check back on this later. If it still hasn't received fixes or at least a response, it could risk being rejected.

Closing this submission for lack of activity & fixes. If you do have fixes, please re-submit your files to a currently active/open batch and refer to this submission in the description / comments when submitting.