6/10

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: First few notes are out of sync 0.025 -> 0.057 / 1.437 -> 1.460

Song is slightly peaky, good example is 2.849 where the kick sounds a bit distorted. Maybe put a limiter or some compression on it?

8.496: Why is this a jump, it's a single everywhere else.
10.437: Why jump?
11.849: Patterning here doesn't really follow what the song is doing, you have these pronounced kicks, but the staircase pattern indicates something else. I would imagine this pattern to be something like: [2][4][2][4][4] for example.
13.260: Same thing here, staircase patterning doesn't really convey the music well. There's no visual seperation between things like kicks and snares.
13.790: Why jump?
16.966: This is a little harsh sounding.
17.672: I feel this is arbitrarily making an anchor with the hand above.
21.554: Again, I think staircase patterns do not convey the sounds well here.
21.907: This should be a jack, the way you have it now 21.996 forms a 5-note anchor on [2] for no reason.
24.201: When looking at this jack on itself it's perfectly justifiable, but you do not jack alot of other jack-worthy sounds. 23.407 is a good example of this.
24.907: These are ~32nds instead of 48ths.
27.246: These notes are off, apply the wave filter and sync them correctly.
30.907: You have a roll here, but 1 measure later at 31.260 the exact same sounds happen and now it's a trill.
32.849: Don't see a reason why these notes should anchor on [1] like this. I like the repetition, but I feel like 31.790 and 33.201 should just be jacks. You will have the cool repetition, but you avoid unnecessary anchors.
33.643: This is kind of a weird pattern if you look at it, offbeat trill into a staircase without much justification.
35.143: The melody right here is so cool, love it. Kinda wish this note was included.
35.319: This should be a different hand, it's a completely different sound from the hand before it.
36.731: Again, a full on staircase for no particular reason. This is breakcore, the drums aren't well conveyed with patterning like this.
37.701: This trill is fine, but then you go into staircase mode again at 38.054.
39.731: You're not stepping these buzzes at all?
42.201: Patterning here is quite decent for what's going on actually, the repetition is decently conveyed, but I still think it could've been done better than just rolls.
42.907: This anchor on [3] is too long.
43.613: Missing burst.
44.054: This trill makes very little sense.
44.584: Neither does this trill into staircase.
45.775: Ghost 32nd jump?
46.260: These first three 32nds are ghost notes.
49.701: Why is this particular burst so much harder than the rest?
50.054: This jump should be different from 50.319. One is a clap and the other one is a snare.

Kinda wish this song was longer, it's quite a BOP actually, I really like the melody throughout the song, it does peak every now and then which is a bit of a shame, I think you can easily fix this by placing a limiter on certain channels or shaving off some of the higher frequencies on certain notes.
Unfortunately I think the patterning in this leaves a lot to be desired. It really isn't patterned like a breakcore song, there are alot of staircases and rolly streams for a song with broken up rhythms and syncopation. I feel there were quite a few notes missing and there were ghost notes in other spots as well.
I don't think this chart is unplayable or anything, but it doesn't meet FFR's standards just yet.

Cya Soon (QwertVibin) [6/10]
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata
>Sync slightly off - adjust offset to -0.029. Notes in this review will use this offset.

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Very promising chart, but lacks cohesion.

The chart does an okay job of accuracy - it is mostly rhythmically accurate, barring some wonky bursts and other specific spots that M0nkeyz did a good job pointing out. But this lacks a sense of cohesion - everything is represented with patterns that are mostly just roll-y. It would really pop with some better pattern variety. Don’t be afraid of some jacks or changing up the layering from the “standard” snares.

Stuff like 39.730 - 40.966 is super underwhelming, comparing it’s intensity to most of the rest of the chart. Similar thing at 51.201.

The chart basically tells me you’ve got some basic fundamentals of charting fairly solidly down, and your next steps should involve thinking a bit more on your pattern and layering choices. Very solid for one of your first charts!