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Charity Auction Ninja :: FFR Batch Submission
Xtreme2252 -
Charity Auction Ninja -
Look Left [6.5 / 10]
June/July 2022
PublicTokenPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
Look Left "Waiting" album permission
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Charity Auction Ninja [Xtreme2252]" vs "Charity Auction Ninja (Xtreme2252)"
- The sim folder contains additional files that can be removed. [ .ssc ]
Simfile Folder Name
Charity Auction Ninja [Xtreme2252]Note Count
1327Chart Length
3:12Average NPS
7.061Estimated Difficulty
50.06
First Note
0:04Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -9
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 1 4 - 18Jumps
x 382
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
14 - 14.00 nps 2 Seconds
23 - 11.50 nps 5 Seconds
50 - 10.00 nps 10 Seconds
95 - 9.50 nps 30 Seconds
252 - 8.40 nps 1 Minute
472 - 7.87 nps
Color Count
x 533 (40.17%)
x 388 (29.24%)
x 30 (2.26%)
x 169 (12.74%)
x 18 (1.36%)
x 138 (10.4%)
x 11 (0.83%)
x 35 (2.64%)
x 5 (0.38%)
Posted at 9:20pm on January 7th, 2023
Charity Auction Ninja (Xtreme2252) [7/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
>Limited Permission - https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4140676&postcount=8647
>Background Piano/Vocals = Single, Kick = Jump
1.275-18.450 - The sync on the vocals could be better. I noticed some of the notes were clearly not on the waveform peaks.
27.450 - If Kick/Piano = Jump, then this spot here should be single. See 22.650.
33.037 - Missing note. Piano
35.850 - Should be single. Only piano, no vocal.
36.150 - Missing jump.
37.837 - Missing note. Piano
39.337 - Ghost note
39.450 - Maybe jump? Percussion noise.
47.250 - Should be jump. Vocal of “figur(A)tive”.
48.750 - Should be jump. Kick
49.350-54.150 - Is this a moment of different layering here?
1:05.400 - Ghost note.
1:06.450/1:07.050/1:07.650 - Missing jump. Piano + Vocal.
1.11.475 - Ghost note. If this was meant for the vocal, then it’s off-sync here, and it’d be closer to 1.11.550.
1:13.050 - Missing jump. Snare + Vocal.
1:24.300 - Missing note. Vocal of “Or”.
1:25.937 - Sounds closer to 1:25.900.
1:28.550 - Vocal should be here, not at 1:28.500/1:28.575
1:30.450 - Missing jump. Vocal + Hi-hat.
1:30.825/1:30.900 - Ghost note
1:32.200 - If this is for that piano noise, then this sounds closer to 1:32.250.
1:34.650/1:35.250 - Missing jump. Vocal + Hi-hat.
1:35.850 - Should be single. No Vocal.
1:36.300/1:39.375/1:41.175 - Ghost note
1:52.950 - I suggest changing this jump to a [24] for better PR
1:55.050 - Should be single. No Vocal.
1:58.050-1:58.650 - What’s going on with the jump layering here?
2:02.587 - Ghost note
2:04.050 - Should be single. No Vocal.
2:05.475 - Ghost note
2:05.850 - Should be jump. Piano + Vocal.
2:16.050/2:16.650/2:17.250/2:19.650 - No 8ths on the Piano anymore?
2:20.850/2:21.450 - Should be jump. Piano + Vocal.
2:23.100/2:23.400 - Clearly off-sync on these Vocals!
2:23.250 - Missing note. Piano.
2:23.850 - Should be jump. Piano + Vocal.
2:25.650/2:26.850 - Should be jump. Vocal + Hi-hat.
2:29.100 - Are you stepping background Vocals too? If so, then this entire file needs to be looked at again. I suggest removing this note to dispel this potential assumption.
2:32.425 - Missing note. Vocal of “A”.
2:38.250 - Should be jump. Vocal + Piano.
2:42.900 - Sounds closer to 2:42.937.
2:43.650 - Should be single. No Piano, Vocal only.
2:45.975 - Sounds closer to 2:46.050.
2:48.150 - Should be [34] b/c the Vocal of “Mister” is higher-pitched this time.
2:51.975 - Sounds closer to 2:51.900.
2:52.050 - Should be single. Piano only.
2:52.650/2:53.250 - Should be jump. Vocal + Piano.
2:53.850 - Should be jump. Snare.
2:56.475 - Ghost note
2:56.700 - Should be single. Vocal only.
2:59.325/2:59.475/3:00.975 - Ghost note
3:06.050 - Missing note. Vocal of “-Neer”.
3:06.450 - Sounds closer to 3:06.375.
3:07.050 - Sounds closer to 3:07.200. Vocal of “Hand”.
>>Problem with using low BPM is that not even 192nds are enough to perfectly sync some of the Vocals in here. I advise rechecking the sync on the Vocals. Despite minor layering issues, the file is technically fine for the most part.
Posted at 9:27pm on January 7th, 2023
Charity Auction Ninja (Xtreme2252) [6/10]
>Permission good (within limited)
>Folder contains .ssc file remove pls. Will judge contents of .sm, only allowable file type.
>Metadata good
>Sync mostly okay but will need specific work, see notes
Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Might be okay, will definitely need to check sync and layering
19.500, 20.100 - move a 96th later (like 20.425)
20.550 - 30.150 - not entirely sure what you’re layering here - seems like you’re trying to capture the constant 8th “right hand” piano, the “left hand” piano melody and the bass. There appear to be some errors here depending on your goal for this section so it’d be worth a touch up. Might consider reducing one of these followed elements if necessary.
30.150 - 49.350 - While I could list out a bunch of tiny vocal sync suggestions here, my bigger concern is again the layering/jump use here, which I can’t find any rationale for.
–The above two notes essentially repeat for the rest of the file. The vocal sync is generally okay or at least close enough but could see minor improvements. The layering issue is endemic to pretty much the entire file and is my biggest concern with it.
There just doesn’t seem to be a logical or musically relevant execution to the layering/jump use emphasis throughout almost the whole file, which makes it feel confusing to play. Addressing this issue would require fairly large structural changes. This is a pretty fun song though, and I could definitely see a simplified layering structure working quite well with it.