Once Upon A Time :: FFR Batch Submission
Snupeh - Once Upon A Time - Toby Fox [7.75 / 10]
June/July 2022
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Simfile Folder Name

Once Upon A Time (Snupeh)

Note Count

160

Chart Length

1:23

Average NPS

1.9958

Estimated Difficulty

5.23

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -10

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

x 12

Hands

x 0

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
3 - 9.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
4 - 8.00 nps 1 Second
5 - 5.00 nps 2 Seconds
8 - 4.00 nps 5 Seconds
18 - 3.60 nps 10 Seconds
34 - 3.40 nps 30 Seconds
84 - 2.80 nps 1 Minute
141 - 2.35 nps

Color Count

x 92 (57.5%)
x 40 (25%)
x 16 (10%)
x 3 (1.88%)
x 2 (1.25%)
x 3 (1.88%)
x 4 (2.5%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.83s1.83s1.83s1.83s1.83s1.6s0.93s0.93s
35
28
21
14
7

7/10 Changes recommended

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 20.275, 22.107: Move both of these to [1] for PR.
- 23.023, 23.939, 24.855: Now you have room to move all of these one to the left for PR.
- 52.336: PR here could be significantly improved. PR goes 4 - 3 - 2 - 1 - 2 - 3 - 1, please have the notes reflect this a bit better.
- 56.916: This should be on the same column as 56.000.

File is alright, I think it does suffer from PR issues that can be resolved without much friction. CR for the PR problems.

Once Upon A Time (Snupeh) [8.5*/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.

- 0:34.473 this is quite a long anchor on 2. there is another one on 2 as well at 0:56.457.

- 1:00.351 Not a huge fan of the minijack jumps here. Its a bit more difficult than anything else in the chart (minus the end) and is in a section that i would argue is more calm. I would personally like to see these reduced to single notes to make it more playable, or you could do some cool additive layering (reducing the 16ths to singles) instead that would still make it more friendly to play. https://i.imgur.com/ZUX7RcL.png

** 1:13.404 This is a huge spike compared to the rest of the file. The previous spike was the 16th minijack jumps which had breaks between them but this is near constant minijacks with unfriendly patters like 334433 and just for quite a while. Additionally This sound starts at 0:58.747 but isn't charted as minijacks. When we reach the outro and the song calms down losing most of its instruments is when you added the spike. Also this runs into a similar issue as Uwa!! So Holiday with the fade out. In isolation i would expect a pattern like this to drop to an 8th stream as the song fades out, matching the intensity of the music. Personally i would end the chart at 1:20.732 as thats one full repeat and the rest is harder to hear, but you can get away with charting the full thing as 8ths.

Outside of the ending spike this is a really nice easy file. However that ending spike really needs to be addressed before this can be accepted.

Thank you for your feedback. I recommend taking a look at the updated version since I made several changes to the chart. If there is any part that is problematic, please let me know. At first glance, the apparent change was the addition of color theory. I used 12th and 24th notes to represent the transitional bass sounds in between.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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MP3 Length changed: 1:29 => 1:20
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Note Count changed: 211 => 160
Chart Length changed: 1:30 => 1:23
AVG NPS changed: 2.41143 => 1.99584
Hand Bias changed: -7 => -6

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: -6 => -10