I thought the roll pattern (last one) deserved at least a jump at the start and finish.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1330 => 1332
AVG NPS changed: 10.07321 => 10.08836

It would be appropriate to use the notes at 01:19.038 - 01:19.600 and 01:20.163 as jumps, silly me.

Time For Revenge (Snupeh) [6/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

3.100: PR, should be on the same column as 2.538 & 2.819. This applies to the whole section, except for iterations like 5.538-7.038 where pitch is decreasing.

10.881: Ghost note.

34.975 & 35.069: These should be hands.

56.538-1:20.538: This whole section is pretty underwhelming. The vocals are the main layering choice yet they're quite inconsistent, and lots of drum kicks were just ignored. I could understand the soft layering if the vocals were sync'd precisely and somehow made the introduction of jumps to the kicks a bit difficult, but this isn't the case.

56.725: Missing 8th for "xi" in "cruxifiction".

57.475: Missing note. "ris" in "jurisdiction".

59.163 & 59.350: These should be one 16th earlier to match "ci" and "sion" in "decision".

1:01.506: Missing 16th. Again, lyrics.

1:02.069: Missing 16th.

1:22.881: This should be on 1:22.975.

1:31.881: Ghost note.

1:50-2:01.038: This section is quite confusing. The synth is given huge importance with the long rollwalls, yet it's not represented in the JS as minijacks or anything.

2:01.600 & 2:01.694: Missing note. Same for 2:02.069.

Overall this chart is lacking a fair bit of execution in different parts of it. The ideas are nice but the difficulty curve is all over the place without much justification from the song.

6.5/10

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 10.882: Ghost note.
- 28.225: Not hearing this 8th.
- 34.600: Why are you following PR here suddenly? Nearly all of these jacks aren't PR'd correctly but here you suddenly do follow PR.
- 59.069: The second vowel of ''de-ci-sion'' falls on the 16th at 59.069 instead of the 4th at 59.163.
- 73.975 - 74.725: I find these patterns way too over the top for something that's essentially a vague background noise. The percussion is way more prominent here.
- 82.882: Second 16th note is way off. It should be @~82.960.
- 91.882: Ghost.
- 111.100(etc.): Technically these notes aren't there, but they makes sense intensity wise. However, I think with this opportunity to be expressive you could have done something alot more interesting than just jumptrills.
- 121.038 - 122.163: 4 different words, 4x the same pattern. Doesn't seem right to me. You also randomly omit alot of notes in between.

From a technical standpoint, this file is mostly fine. However, I think this file suffers from repetitiveness and it's a bit over the top in terms of patterning. This file suffers from PR problems as well, alot of the jacks aren't actually repeating the same pitch.
I find the long 32nd bursts a bit boring, I think slowing it down to 24ths/28ths and making the patterns a bit more streamy would spice this file up a lot. I also think some of the anchors are too long as a result of the overlayering.