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Wiosna - Black Lawn Finale - The Flashbulb [7.75 / 10]

June/July 2022

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16th use is quite freeform in structure. ositz don't hurt me.

- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Black Lawn Finale (Wiosna) - Copy" vs "Black Lawn Finale (Wiosna)"

- The sim folder contains additional files that can be removed. [ .jpg, .ini ]

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Simfile Folder Name

Black Lawn Finale (Wiosna) - Copy

Note Count

1740

Chart Length

2:36

Average NPS

11.6988

Estimated Difficulty

74.17

First Note

0:07

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 30

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 10 4 - 34

Jumps

								x 497
							

Hands

								x 22
							

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 1

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
18 - 18.00 nps 2 Seconds
34 - 17.00 nps 5 Seconds
77 - 15.40 nps 10 Seconds
148 - 14.80 nps 30 Seconds
420 - 14.00 nps 1 Minute
823 - 13.72 nps

Color Count

x 747 (42.93%)

x 547 (31.44%)

x 24 (1.38%)

x 392 (22.53%)

x 14 (0.8%)

x 6 (0.34%)

x 0 (0%)

x 10 (0.57%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.67s0.67s0.5s0.5s0.5s0.5s0.5s0.5s

Black Lawn Finale (Wiosna) [7.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

8.302 - Why is this not a [34]?
12.533/12.643 - These are technically 32nds, not 12ths.
18.907 - Why not [34]?
21.407/22.561 - Missing note
24.044-24.291 - Missing some stuff in this region?
24.456 - Should be different PR than a [14].
24.539 - Missing note
34.017 - Missing jump. Kick.
35.253 - Missing note
36.489 - Was this note meant for the Kick or the Hi-hat?
47.451 - Could put a jump here for the Kick.
56.393 - I guess no note here to avoid the spike of 32nd into Hand?
56.764 - Missing jump
1:00.638 - Missing note. See 1:00.143. There’s probably more of this slight inconsistency throughout the file.
1:04.676 - Should be diff PR than [14].
1:05.912 - Missing note. See 1:05.418.
1:13.577/1:31.709/1:35.006 - Missing jump. Kick.
1:46.874 - Should be diff PR than a [14].
1:49.841 - Should be single. See 1:46.544.
1:53.797 - Missing note. Background piano melody.
1:57.423 - Should be diff PR than [14].
1:59.072 - Missing note. Background piano melody.

>>Not much emphasis on both the PR and the glitch noises, which is quite different when compared to most of the Flashbulb files here. Still, mostly straightforward and consistent.

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Black Lawn Finale (Wiosna) [8/10]
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents good. Remove subtitle pls
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Seems solid.

51.489 - not sure why this is a hand. Reducing could make for a counterpoint of 51.160 (move the 1 up a 32nd)
2:02.616, 2:07.890, 2:13.165, 2:18.440 - not having this note is a bit weird for how prominent it is, would maybe suggest removing the previous 16th in favour of having this one
2:21.654 - kind of think it’d be better to end here but I’m majorly biassed against drawn out endings in general

Add a “subjective, can ignore” modifier to all of my notes here. Freeform charts like this are hard to give concrete feedback on, but I think this as-is is a reasonably effective approach that results in a pretty fun file overall.

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ositz:
8.302 - Just to avoid a 5-note anchor, quite prude but I think it works here
12.533 - Fixed, thank you
18.907 - I am quite prude.
21.407/22.561/24.044/24.539 - Felt a bit too soft to add singles.
24.456 - Chord is [14] because of the bass kick at 24.291.
34.017 - Added
36.489 - hi-hat
47.451 - Feel that the kick isn't strong enough to justify a double.
56.393 - More or less.
56.764 - anchors :(
1:00.638/etc. - This was intentionally omitted, but I think adding a gallop here works just fine. Added.
1:04/etc - Fixed.
1:49.841 - Fixed, along with similar errors
1:53.797/etc. - Wasn't following the piano melody here.

Tru:
51.489 - You're completely right, I think that was an error on my end. Fixed.
2:02.616 - Tried something a bit different here (removed the 16th here and added a double a 16th before, and added the 16ths as requested)
2:21.654 - Ending is a bit drawn out but I'd like to keep the break here because it's ~thematically fitting~.

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A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1733 => 1740
AVG NPS changed: 11.65173 => 11.69879
Hand Bias changed: 29 => 30

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