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A Day At Sea :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo -
A Day At Sea -
Everen Maxwell [7.75 / 10]
June/July 2022
PublicEvents
Released
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4304208&postcount=27
NCS Blanket Permissions
YT: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cOKydzQPXuE
YT: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cOKydzQPXuE
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Simfile Folder Name
A Day At Sea (WirryWoo)Note Count
699Chart Length
1:42Average NPS
7.7753Estimated Difficulty
46.68
First Note
0:12Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 7
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 24Jumps
x 156
Hands
x 36
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
12 - 12.00 nps 2 Seconds
21 - 10.50 nps 5 Seconds
48 - 9.60 nps 10 Seconds
92 - 9.20 nps 30 Seconds
264 - 8.80 nps 1 Minute
481 - 8.02 nps
Color Count
x 377 (53.93%)
x 0 (0%)
x 297 (42.49%)
x 0 (0%)
x 23 (3.29%)
x 0 (0%)
x 2 (0.29%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 1:26pm on April 8th, 2023
A Day At Sea (WirryWoo) [7.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
35.221-37.096 - Could spice up the drop with some ascending PR
47.408-48.190 - [34]21 for two different noises? Fix PR plz
58.033 - Missing note
1:08.033-1:08.346 - PR could be better
1:15.533/1:16.471/1:23.033/1:38.033 - Why stop putting jumps here?
>>Mostly straightforward & consistent
Posted at 1:33pm on April 8th, 2023
A Day At Sea
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.
- 19.752: Same pitch as 20.065, would be cool to rearrange this to match their columns.
- 35.221: As far as I can tell, this doesn't have the sound you're following as jumps on the next four beats, so should only be a single. Moreover the percussion you follow starting at 34.752 only starts playing constant 12ths at 35.690, giving another reason to not begin the pattern repetition until then.
- 38.502: I think this would be really cool as a 434 trill, both because the sound is pretty striking and as a fun call-and-response type pattern with 38.034.
- 68.034: This jack technically makes sense, but feels really weird due to how subdued the sound is.
- 68.659: Missing note.
- 69.987: Missing 24th.
- As a general note, I'm pretty cool with the frequent use of minijacks into jumps to create tension and emphasize the melody/whatever sound you're following with a jump, but it does seem to be inconsistently applied at times. I'd suggest looking back through it and making sure you're using it when you want to and only when you want to, just to really make it pop.
- Cool file overall. A couple things I'd suggest looking over but certainly plays nice enough for an accept. [8/10]
Posted at 10:14am on April 16th, 2023
Edits fixed. Thanks for the review.
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 691 => 699
AVG NPS changed: 7.68632 => 7.77531
Hand Bias changed: 11 => 7