The Villager (Velocity) [6.5/10]
>Permission good (2020 BOF)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Seems broadly okay, but some polish might be needed here.

8.656 - missing
10.149, .556 - missing
14.832 - (somewhat subjective) missing
18.837 - VERY subjective, but I don’t hear this note
19.040 - missing
26.167. 32.683 - missing 32nd flourish for consistency (optional, can see it being a bit crowded here)
54.131 - missing
54.402 - missing 32nd flourish
1:02.275 - missing
1:02.954 - don’t hear this
1:10.081 - don’t hear this
1:11.167 - missing

1:11.778 - 1:29.153 - this section needs some cleanup. In a basic sense, it doesn’t seem like you’ve decided whether you’re following the background instrument and it results in feeling pretty messy. I’d suggest focusing on the piano/horn here, -maayyyybeee- layer in drums, and either ignore the background or add them only in combination with the horn.
-1:12.796 - ghost; probably wanted it at .660 instead
-1:17.140 - ghost
-1:17.751 - [23] for PR, might move .615 to 1 or 4
-1:18.837 - [23] for PR

1:31.020 - suggest removing or add 1:39.708 for consistency
1:37.751 - ? missing
2:21.144 - probably want note here
2:27.253 - probably want note here

Lots of little tweaks are gonna be needed here, and a few sections where it’s unclear what you’re trying to follow. I can broadly see and I like what the chart is going for, but needs a fair bit of cleanup in execution in some sections and structural fixes in other sections.

5/10

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 1.258, 1.801: I would just omit these notes, they're not very prominent and you're not including 1.461 and 2.004.
- 8.656, 60.783: Missing note to the vocals.
- 10.556: Missing note.
- 25.896: This shouldn't be a jack.
- 28.882: Jump?
- 33.192: Missing 64th.
- 54.131: Missing note.
- 62.276: Missing note.
- 62.683: Missing note.
- 74.629, 75.036: Jump? Chord.
- 76.054: Missing note.
- 77.751: Pitch is higher than 78.023, I would make this a [23] as well.
- 77.887: Missing note.
- 78.701: Missing note.
- 80.330: Missing note.
- 80.534: Ghost note.
- 82.231, 84.946: Jump? Chord.
- 95.398: Should not be a jack.
- 102.728: This 4th should not be on [3].
- 108.701, 109.244, 109.651, 109.787: These notes are all a different pitch, they shouldn't be on the same column.
- 116.371: Missing note.
- 147.253: Missing note.
- 163.283: Move to 163.249.
- 163.475: Move to 163.452.
- 163.803: Move to 163.792.
- 163.871: Move to 163.860.
- 163.961: Move to 163.950.
- 164.052: Move to 164.029.
- 164.120: Move to 164.109.
- 164.199: Move to 164.176.
- 164.267: Move to 164.256.
- 164.369: Move to 164.323.
- 164.425: Move to 164.403.
- 164.572: Move to 164.538.
- 164.787: Move to 164.765.
- 165.172: Move to 165.127.
- 165.500: Move to 165.489.
- 165.579: Move to 165.568.
- 165.670: Move to 165.658.
- 165.760: Move to 165.726.
- 165.851: Move to 165.839.
- 166.280: Move to 166.269.
- 166.609: Move to 166.597.
- 167.016: Move to 166.993.
- 167.491: Move to 167.468.
- 168.102: Move to 168.090.
- 169.001: Missing note.

Chart feels really off to play, mostly due to missing notes/missing jumps and the sync at the end feels off as well. I think this chart requires a substantial amount of work to be acceptable.