Starry sky of a slight sleep :: FFR Batch Submission
Velocity - Starry sky of a slight sleep - alfear [8 / 10]
June/July 2022
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BoF Permission: https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=280&event=116
Song Name:
微睡の星空

Artist Name:
さんまのこぼね

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Starry sky of a slight sleep (Velocity)

Note Count

699

Chart Length

2:13

Average NPS

5.4074

Estimated Difficulty

47.95

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -15

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 2 4 - 15

Jumps

x 157

Hands

x 6

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 2

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
12 - 12.00 nps 2 Seconds
21 - 10.50 nps 5 Seconds
45 - 9.00 nps 10 Seconds
84 - 8.40 nps 30 Seconds
230 - 7.67 nps 1 Minute
377 - 6.28 nps

Color Count

x 358 (51.22%)
x 203 (29.04%)
x 41 (5.87%)
x 12 (1.72%)
x 41 (5.87%)
x 0 (0%)
x 12 (1.72%)
x 0 (0%)
x 32 (4.58%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.43s1.37s1.37s0.93s0.93s0.93s0.93s0.93s
35
28
21
14
7

Starry sky of a slight sleep
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- Permission, sync good.
- Gonna assume metadata is good since it shows up on the site lol. DDReam doesn't seem to like it much though.

- 30.746, 34.439, 36.746: Missing jump.
- 48.285: Minijack, like 37.208?
- 50.362, 68.822: This pattern feels a bit underwhelming. Given how you follow things like 61.438, I wonder if a pattern like https://imgur.com/a/rOgEZAL might be more fitting. Or one like what you do at 96.054.
- 51.746: Would prefer if these felt a bit more like flams. As is, this isn't far from a continuous 16th rhythm, which doesn't really match the sound imo. 94.669 is better but I do sorta have the same complaint there.
- 84.976: Feels alright with only a jump imo.
- 86.592: Suggest avoiding OHT here since there's no real reason for one, maybe a pattern like [23]42[13]. Similarly 104.670.
- 87.515: Should only be a single, like 88.207.
- 93.976: Perhaps column 3 to accentuate repeating kick?

* 99.054 etc.: Really do not like how the 48th flams here collide with the 24th pattern--this feels like it starts with a 48th triplet, when in reality there is no such triplet and it's just a result of accenting bumping into something else. Multicoloured jumps would work better imo, or just cyan jumps.

- 106.441: Should be white note, and should share a column with preceding hand.
* 111.285: You used 3-note trills for this before, and 111.824 is a ghost note.
- 114.747: Minijack?

- Nice chill file, pleasant to play for sure. My main two issues with it are the 48th flam collisions at 99.054 and similar cases, and the inconsistency in the patterning of the longer 24th runs--in the first half you follow them with outward rolls, and in the second you follow them with a mixture of 3-note trills, 4-note trills, and other streamy patterns. The second half does it a fair bit better imo. They do not need to be completely homogenized of course, but I do feel they should at least be thematically consistent. [7.5/10]

8.5/10

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good enough

- 25.898: Instead of this being a jump I think 26.360 being a jump would make more sense.
- 48.283/51.052(etc.): Jack?
- 73.205: Should probably not be on the same column as 72.513.
- 93.974: Jump? See 99.514.
- 110.591: ^ Jump.

Very nice, it may have some minor technical inconsistencies, but it's really fun to play and flows well.

Moving this to DC Engine for difficulty rating, despite not receiving a fix, as this song rating is set to 'Approved'. Please get in-touch with me if you are sending fixes, as I will also need to apply them for Difficulty Consultants.

It has been updated on DC engine as well.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Starry sky of a slight sleep [微睡の星空] => Starry sky of a slight sleep
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Hand Bias changed: -21 => -15