Miku Area 5 (Psychotik) [8/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

6.104-8.103: Bit odd layering. For example, 6.354 is a jump going to just a bass kick, but 6.979 & 7.604 aren't yet they're a kick + some instrument. Then there's 6.854 which is vocals with drums, but that's the only place where vocals is layered additively (compare to 6.479, 7.104 & 7.604).

13.353: Weird PR with 13.103.

1:02.853: Hand? Crash.

1:06.104: Jump.

1:18.604-1:18.854: Wrong PR.

1:27.979: Missing note.

1:28.604: Bad PR with 1:28.229.

1:29.729: Should probably be a white jump to fit 1:29.859.

1:29.979: Bit weird that this is a plain jump when it's basically 1:29.604 but slightly louder.

2:11.269: Could alleviate by not having a 5-chain on either hand.

2:14.685: Missing note.

2:16.101: Would suggest making this a (123) minijack into the 3's, and moving 2:16.018 to col 4 for more emphasis on the vocals.

2:18.267: Arguably missing note. (Considering 2:19.017)

2:50.973: Should be a jump ("ki" of "kiete" in lyrics).

2:51.973: Single.

2:57.473: The previous shifting long vowels weren't layered as jumps (see 2:49.473 and 2:50.723).

2:58.723: Jump ("ru" of "haguruma").

2:59.223: Jump ("mi").

2:59.473: Single (held "a").

3:26.645: Ghost note.

This chart is pretty fun to play and has lots of little interesting sections plus a gradual buildup in difficulty. Most of the notes are polishing stuff and slight layering/PR inconsistencies, but they're easy fixes that would improve overall quality.

7/10 FR

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 2.479: Would personally put this on [3] because it's clearly lower in pitch than 3.479.
- 6.854 - 7.979: Not entirely sure what constitutes a jump here.
- 8.979: Jump?
- 10.354/10.416: Intensity wise these two feel alot less prominent than the 8th/4th at 10.479/10.604. I would make them singles like 10.729/10.791.
- 13.104/16.854: Hand?
- 20.854: This should probably be a jump.
- 26.479: I understand you have a lack of room here, but I would still avoid making this a 4-note anchor, you could put the second 8th on a different column.
- 27.291/27.541: Ghost notes?
- 30.541: Ghost note.
- 31.166/33.666: Missing note.
- 35.416/35.791: Could include these vocals.
- 56.041: Missing note.
- 59.187/59.437: These are in the wrong place, they should be 16ths AFTER the 8ths.
- 67.792: Missing note, I would make the 8th before it a single so it can fit.
- 73.021: This burst should start at 72.989.
- 73.729: Missing note, see 69.729.
- 75.666/75.916: I find these 16ths quite prominent. Worth including imo.
- 87.979: Missing note.
- 104.666, 105.666: Missing note.
- 115.354: Not a huge fan of these 32nd bursts, I'd prefer jumps or colored notes here because as it is right now they kinda blend in with 115.854 which is distinctly different.
- 115.479: Missing note, probably omitted on purpose, see comment above^.
- 118.916: Missing note, see 118.291.
- 124.229: Move to 124.271.
- 153.765: Jack seems a bit forced
- 160.014: Same here, I feel this jack is a bit arbitrary.
- 171.785: Missing note, I understand the omission though. Not a huge deal.
- 173.785: Missing 16th.
- 174.910 - 175.160: Hard to hear what these 16ths are going to.
- 175.785: Ghost note?
- 176.035/177.035: Missing note.
- 186.722/187.097: Jumps to snares? See 186.347.
- 190.535: Ghost-y.
- 196.035: This 16th should be BEFORE the 8th.
- 198.769/198.957/201.019: Missing 16ths.
- 206.128: Jump?
- 206.644: Ghost-y
- 217.050: Missing 16th.
- 219.628/220.003: I would include these 16ths. It's very swingy.
- 226.379: Should be a 16th at 226.425.
- 229.191: Missing note.
- 230.035: Jack?

Sorry for the long list of notes, these are all minor points. However, I think cumulatively they kinda become a problem. I think the chart is acceptable, but lacks polish. I'm going to give it an FR because I think this chart would benefit from an extra look-over.

Quick ping to see where fixes are at for this file, since it's been over a month and it's starting to approach OT season.

Moving to Rejected for the sake of organization. If fixes are made, please re-submit them and refer to this batch submission. We have some new batches opening up soon.