Blue Holiday :: FFR Batch Submission
Deamerai - Blue Holiday - Pogo [7 / 10]
15th Official Tournament (Less Than 70 Difficulty)
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Simfile Folder Name

Blue Holiday (Deamerai)

Note Count

1136

Chart Length

3:11

Average NPS

6.1605

Estimated Difficulty

46.8

First Note

0:07

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

No Bias

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 3 4 - 2

Jumps

x 260

Hands

x 32

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 1

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
12 - 12.00 nps 2 Seconds
20 - 10.00 nps 5 Seconds
45 - 9.00 nps 10 Seconds
84 - 8.40 nps 30 Seconds
212 - 7.07 nps 1 Minute
405 - 6.75 nps

Color Count

x 405 (35.65%)
x 293 (25.79%)
x 20 (1.76%)
x 226 (19.89%)
x 6 (0.53%)
x 119 (10.48%)
x 5 (0.44%)
x 14 (1.23%)
x 48 (4.23%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.97s0.97s0.93s0.93s0.93s0.57s0.5s0.5s
35
28
21
14
7

[7/10] Change Recommended.

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Offset: good

A large portion of this song has 96th swing instead of straight 16th notes, but it plays fine.

- 6.685: Move to 6.704.
- 31.716(etc.): I find this pattern a bit excessive for the sound, but that's subjective I guess.
- 46.779: This feels like a missing note.
- 63.768: This should be a hand, see 56.217 (I assume these are to the chords).

*** 68.724 - 83.117: This whole section feels really off to me, alot of the 32nds are going to soft background sounds, but you're omitting sounds to the vocals/kick and other prominent aspects of the song. It just doesn't feel right to me, I would just focus on the vocals and ignore the soft hi-hats in the background.

- 70.375, 70.847, 72.735, 74.151, 74.623: Why are these kicks omitted or singles? The only reason I can think of is that you want to put more emphasis on the hi-hats in the background, which I don't think captures the essence of the song very well.
- 69.313: Missing note to the vocals.
- 83.353: Any reason why the trill doesn't start here?
- 104.865: Missing note to the melody, they're all seven 192nds apart. ( https://imgur.com/a/NzO9P93 )
- 105.298: Move to 105.278. Also move 104.983 to 105.003. (see screenshot above)
- 159.452: This section feels alot more accurate than 68.724 without all the 32nd notes.
- 173.963(etc.): Same issue as earlier, not sure why the trills don't start on these notes.

Song is pretty interesting, I find some of the sections a bit hard to follow (mainly 68.724 - 83.117), song feels alot more swingy than the chart is telling me (alot of the 16ths are actually 96th or 192nd swing notes), but it feels alright for the most part. Change Recommended for the *** section, because I think you should reconsider having this as 32nd streams.

Changed 01:08.724 - 01:23.117 back to normal

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1150 => 1136
AVG NPS changed: 6.23644 => 6.16052
Hand Bias changed: 2 => 0