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suicidaln00b - O Wings that Embrace Senju Banmei - lufm [8 / 10]
15th Official Tournament (More Than 70 Difficulty)
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Simfile Folder Name

O Wings that Embrace Senju Banmei (suicidaln00b)

Note Count

1825

Chart Length

2:30

Average NPS

12.621

Estimated Difficulty

101.74

First Note

0:05

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -33

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 2 2 - 24 3 - 238 4 - 190

Jumps

x 198

Hands

x 72

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 3

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
16 - 32.00 nps 1 Second
28 - 28.00 nps 2 Seconds
51 - 25.50 nps 5 Seconds
109 - 21.80 nps 10 Seconds
208 - 20.80 nps 30 Seconds
513 - 17.10 nps 1 Minute
961 - 16.02 nps

Color Count

x 722 (39.56%)
x 411 (22.52%)
x 127 (6.96%)
x 342 (18.74%)
x 49 (2.68%)
x 1 (0.05%)
x 0 (0%)
x 2 (0.11%)
x 171 (9.37%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.5s1.53s1.33s1.33s1.33s1.1s0.87s0.87s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1824 => 1825
AVG NPS changed: 12.61411 => 12.62102
Hand Bias changed: -36 => -35

Senju Banmei wo Idaku Tsubasa yo (suicidaln00b)

- Offset's fine.

12.827 - Missing these strings of 12th, you can still use it until 13.124.

These strings of minijacks at 270bpm are pretty nasty....

*1:12.753 - These handjacks are fine, but the anchoring on column 4 accounting on the former layering feels a bit much to me I think, maybe try alternating or a different hand placement (like [123] or [234] or something?)
1:13.924 - Would be better to make it as a two-hand trilling instead of one hand trilling like this.

I really like the jumpstream construction on this, it felt deliberate on its OH or two hand trilling transitions.

1:24.753 - mmmm the streams are fine, but it felt like its anchors are packed on the middle columns. It'd be better to use some of it the outer column anchoring instead of putting all into the middle columns.

The jumpstreams on 1:50.309 are also well done too.

Very solid file all around - before judging this fully, when I saw the minijacks being used, I was under the impression that 270bpm minijacks used this much felt like it'd be a spike all around, but there's a lot of room in variety and the song definitely works for it.

The points I made are mostly minor, though I still urge you to take a look at 1:12.753 since the handjacks are pretty fast, and the anchors on column 4 might be a bit too heavy to be played on a full run. [8/10, Change Recommended]

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A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Senju Banmei wo Idaku Tsubasa yo => O Wings that Embrace Senju Banmei
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Hand Bias changed: -35 => -33

thanks 4 review, applied all the notes except the one for 12.827. the instrument there is too quiet to be stepped imo

also changed the title to english, which may or may not be a dodgy translation :]