[6.5/10]

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Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 2.196 - 2.557: PR here could be improved, 2.196 is lower pitch than 1.834. Something like this would be more accurate: https://imgur.com/a/c6GdwpM
- 2.919: Move to 2.934~
- 3.732 - 3.913: PR is descending here (I'd suggest 4 - 2 - 1)
- 5.087 - 5.358: Again PR is descending here.
- 5.449 - 5.629: PR is ascending. (this would be a perfect place for a 4-3-2-1-2-3-4 staircase from 5.087 to 5.629)
- 6.563: Somewhat strange that this gets a grace to the vocals when you don't grace spots like 2.226, 2.873, 4.033 etc.
- 8.521: Mostly a suggestion, but I think you could put more emphasis on the syncopated 16ths by removing this 8th.
- 9.876: There's no reason why this 16th anchor should be 4 notes long, the sounds change.
- 22.391: This should be a 48th at 22.406 instead.
- 26.774: Why is this a jump?
- 27.858: This jack should be left of the jack at 28.039 for PR.
- 34.590: chance for a fun little poly burst here(34.590, 34.635, 34.666)
- 41.955 - 43.400: This whole section feels overly hard on the right hand, you go from a 16th trill on the right hand into a pretty right-hand biased 24th pattern.
- 50.539: I understand the thought process behind this pattern, but these 16ths shouldn't jack with the jumps; it's especially confusing because you just used jacks for a completely different sound at 50.087.
- 55.870: Should be a jump to the click.
- 60.388: The 4th should be connected to the 16th at 60.479 and the 8th at 60.569 should be connected to the 16th at 60.660 since they're closer in pitch. (60.750 shouldn't be connected)
- 62.105: See 50.539.
- 67.979: Why is there no burst here? See 68.340, 69.063.
- 80.675: This should be a 48th.
- 80.810: Shouldn't be part of the anchor.
- 88.943: This note shouldn't be part of the anchor.
- 90.931: Missing 8th.
- 90.991: This should just be a 32nd at 90.976.
- 91.292: Why are these jacks?
- 106.563: Missing note.
- 114.244: This should be a hand, see 112.798.
- 120.208: I would make this jump different from 120.027, different sounds.
- 126.443: Missing 16th.

Chart could use some work, some parts are really enjoyable, but other parts made me wonder what exactly the patterns were going to especially some of the jacks/jumps. Second half is also considerably harder than the first, especially those polystreams.

sm conversion with holds, which is why a lot of the PR is fucked up lol

disagree with the majority of these notes unfortunately lol