FOX (jh05013) [8/10]
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- 0:00.244, 0:03.722, ect. You really should fill in the 8ths here as its the same sound as 0:01.983. Similarly at 0:13.940 you should fill in the jumps. I can understand not wanting to go too hard with the chart, but there are harder sections like 0:55.679 so honestly it shouldn't cause any difficulty concerns. At the very least i feel these two sections should be charted in the same way.

- 0:27.853-0:41.766 This section has a LOT going on in the music. It is quite frankly hard to hear everything going on and identify the different sections. Initially listening i had no clue whatever the notes were supposed to be following. There are a few causes but one of them is just the chaos of sound in the music mixed with so many similar sounds and what sounds like an echo. The other main issue i see is that you are following multiple instruments and it can be hard to tell where one instrument stops and the other begins due to the music. This in the combination of notes that sound like they might have been missed in the chart (like 0:28.831 (the more i listen the more i'm convinced this note is missed every time)) just lead to more confusion. One option that could be done is to ignore the melody entirely and just focus on the kicks. Its boring but it works. Honestly what i think is the real solution is to fill in the missing notes and remove the first kick from each section, which will make room for the new notes and make the transition a little more clear with the increased space.

- 0:43.070 These jumps feel out of place with the rest of the song. I understand why those sounds are jumps but then you have places like 0:48.287 which has the same sound but no jump, as well as places like 0:42.200 which has the sound but no note. As well in the next section you dont even use jumps with notes like 0:57.853. I think it would be better if the jumps were removed to make this section more in line with the rest of the song. I know its weird to add a sound and remove notes, but i think its the better option here.

- 1:37.418 i dont know if it was intentional but this section is quite heavy on the left hand, with the pattern being only on 3 keys.

Outside of the one confusing section this is a really nice easier chart. It does a good job of following the right sounds making interesting rhythms and creating what should be a fun easy chart.

FOX (jh05013) [9/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

1:37.418-2:05.244: Having the same exact layering here than in the previous section feels a bit anticlimatic.

2:05.244-2:33.070: There's a bit of inconsistency with the structure of the minijacks here. Sometimes they're repeated on the same column, sometimes they aren't, and it's not entirely clear why they are/aren't.

Super fun chart, great flow and PR. Not much else to say about this one.

phew I'm not late. Will fix soon, happy new year!!

Mostly applied the judges' comments. Edited the intro; 1:37.418- now has a jump every 4 beats; moved some minijacks around for column variety (though there really wasn't an intended philosophy on which minijacks are the same column)

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 436 => 446
AVG NPS changed: 2.84843 => 2.91376
Hand Bias changed: -4 => -10

Gonna move this along as-is due to Accepted rating.