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Cardboard Box [7.5 / 10]
15th Official Tournament (More Than 70 Difficulty)
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Song Title: ++
Song Author: Cardboard Box
Step Author: mi40
Permissions: Blanket
Song Author: Cardboard Box
Step Author: mi40
Permissions: Blanket
Simfile Folder Name
++ (mi40)Note Count
1817Chart Length
1:54Average NPS
16.8137Estimated Difficulty
96.08
First Note
0:06Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 5
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 163 4 - 260Jumps
x 375
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second12 - 36.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
15 - 30.00 nps 1 Second
25 - 25.00 nps 2 Seconds
45 - 22.50 nps 5 Seconds
104 - 20.80 nps 10 Seconds
201 - 20.10 nps 30 Seconds
586 - 19.53 nps 1 Minute
1091 - 18.18 nps
Color Count
x 692 (38.08%)
x 555 (30.54%)
x 0 (0%)
x 570 (31.37%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 7:37pm on July 31st, 2022
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- Permissions, sync, metadata good.
- 25.551, 83.998: Jump wouldn't be out of place here.
- 26.551: On the other hand, this should be a single.
- 41.551-42.051: Misrhythm, should match 39.551-40.051.
- 53.721 / 55.680 / etc.: Arguable missing jumps--you followed these in the 43.551-51.504 section. I would also understand omitting them to focus on stamina since this is a longer jumpstream though.
- 81.772: This left hand pattern is a little awkward.
- 84.701, 85.170: Compared to the rest of this jumpstream (and the analogous earlier ones like 18.051) these jumps should be removed. Alternatively fill it in like the jumpstream at 91.967, but whatever you do make it consistent at least with the other ones in this part of the chart.
- 101.342: This jumpstream also stands out as being noticeably denser than the one at 27.801.
- 110.014: Actual perfect patterning from here to the end, love it.
Nice file, the patterning in the jumpstream is a bit unusual but pretty fun, and it has some nice details with trill usage. My two main concerns are:
* The 8th minijack patterns are used pretty imprecisely in the slower bits, and
* The ending is noticeably denser and it's not clear why.
I think fixing these would greatly improve the file (hence the CR), but I still had fun with it and it's passable as-is. [7.5/10 CR]
Posted at 1:56am on August 1st, 2022
when do you need changes by, i'm a bit busy this week
Posted at 1:24pm on August 1st, 2022
Within the next four weeks, though if for whatever reason even that time frame is untenable let me know & it can be extended.
Posted at 4:49am on August 3rd, 2022
okay how is this? plays better in my opinion
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: -1 => 5
Posted at 9:04pm on August 6th, 2022
All good