Endymion (DarkZtar)

- Offset's fine.

I'm having a hard time to judge this mainly because 149bpm chordjack is perfectly fine, but turning into such extremely heavy layering is something that FFR isn't quite ready for, personally. As such, I'll be giving out pointers where I think this can still get a chance for it to be a suitable chordjack chart, but for now this is super heavy (especially the song isn't all that punchy that warrants this density.)

9.934-21.511 - Since your former layering is basically doing the 3-1-2-1-3 (hand-single-jump-single-hand), I feel this section being upgraded by turning singles to jumps are a bit too much given the buildup isn't quite up there. You should make it the same, and focus on the cymbals only to be upgraded to jumps (see 11.646-11.847), and then you can tune up the melody using the 3-2-2-2-3 variant (hand-jump-jump-jump-hand), starting at 15.169.
**21.813 - The hands are introduced in this section are overbearingly spiky and should be reduced to jumps. You should only give attention by putting hands when the cymbal/melody are very strikingly distinct (such as 24.632, though the 16ths before and after should also be reduced to jumps).
33.391 - Should be a jump from that bass kick you've layered.

I really liked the gradual break section, especially the attention to PR on here is definitely refreshing.

47.384 - Quad is too much, should be a hand.
1:07.719/1:07.921 - Should be hands, following the strong bass kicks.
**1:13.156 - This entire section up until 2:03.089 is really what puts me down, as the difficulty from the chordjacks in the first half picks up tenfold, it's just way too aggressive with hands being introduced a lot more frequently, so this entire patch is absolutely brutal to play, and from a musical standpoint this also feels unnecessarily heavy without much justification. I can see the additive approach to this, but given the chordjacks at the first half is already very heavy, this second half is not only mega heavy to the players who are able to play chordjacks very adeptly, it's also very hard to keep up given there are no breaks and the layering stays pretty much the same throughout.

I feel like this can be made into a decent chordjack file, but the issue that I have is mostly the extensive amount of how dense the chordjacks are in both halves of the song, and I'm not too comfortable with accepting this as-is - the chordjack sections do need to be toned down a notch. I do think the middle section is quite well done though, so feel free to DM me if this actually gets in so that I can help you with toning down the chordjacks or any other questions for this. [6.5/10]

FR note: Refer to **'d notes above and especially for toning down in 1:13.156.

Given the file has pretty much toned down to a point where it's now significantly better, I'm on board with this major change. I do want to thank you for your cooperation on making this big of an effort and I do believe this will be the hardest, yet also a good release of pure chordjack file in FFR. Chordjack mains are going to love this.

GS has already given the OK as well, so this is good to go.

Setting this to Accepted.