Nhelv (Wind0ze & Deamerai)

- Offset's good.

I liked the first minute of this, it's pretty much in-line on what I expected for a dump take on this song. The touch of 32nds in 40.443 and 1:46.429 are also really nice too.

47.704 - Seems a bit rough on the left hand focus here, might want to balance this a bit out.
48.649 - Should be a jump.
49.164 - I think thie 192nd should connect to form a jump, like the one you did for 46.415 - I understood why would that be colored, but it's a bit too subtle to notice and potentially came across as offsynced.
49.422 - Hmmm. I'm somehow feeling a bit conflicted with how not using a jump for here but at the same time I understood the omittance, but in fairness the 32nds (49.465~49.723) can be reduced to 28ths since it's a bit of a different glitchy noise. For 49.766 you can do a jump too.
1:03.169 - Could sneak a jump in here as well.
1:08.410 & 1:12.534 & 1:23.532 & 1:24.906 & 1:27.656 - Same as before.
2:14.216 - Might want to move this note elsewhere, to not create an implicit minijack for the continuous buzz, since it doesn't occur anywhere else in this section.
2:19.121 - I feel a bit bummed that you didn't decide to use coloured dumpstreams for the buzz earlier, but it's not a big deal anyways.

Quite a spicy file, and judging by your previous submission from past year of this, I feel like this is more than good enough to be acceptable. The only things worth rechecking are the missing jumps, and a bit rough-around-the-edges transition on one spot, which might catch people off-guard. This could be used in the next OT, and it's quite fun. [8/10]