Monument :: FFR Batch Submission
T-Force - Monument - Miss May I [6.5 / 10]
Jan/Feb 2022
PublicPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273003&postcount=4 - Rise Records permissions

Simfile Folder Name

Monument (T-Force)

Note Count

2238

Chart Length

3:37

Average NPS

10.4775

Estimated Difficulty

84.04

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -28

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 2 3 - 25 4 - 12

Jumps

x 322

Hands

x 58

Quads

x 2

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
37 - 18.50 nps 5 Seconds
89 - 17.80 nps 10 Seconds
166 - 16.60 nps 30 Seconds
393 - 13.10 nps 1 Minute
724 - 12.07 nps

Color Count

x 866 (38.7%)
x 529 (23.64%)
x 203 (9.07%)
x 486 (21.72%)
x 152 (6.79%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 2 (0.09%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.77s0.77s0.77s0.77s0.77s0.77s0.77s0.73s
35
28
21
14
7

Monument (T-Force) [6/10]
>Permission good (Rise Records)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Difficulty curve is pretty unbalanced. Layering choices could be more interesting. Close, but needs work.

48.798-57.798 - at the current difficulty this would work much better as simple stream rather than light js. Even that would be a significant jump in the file’s overall difficulty. Definitely hope you avoid OHTs like at 52.923 as well
1:00.798-1:09.610 - I don’t understand if there’s any reason that only some of these 16th triplets have minijacks
1:27.048 - straight 24ths that stop at 1:28.173 (optional no note at 1:27.485, decide on accuracy feel vs perceived playability here)
1:27.798 - no vocal - why jump?
1:33.798 - 24ths start here
1:39.048 - repeat of 1:27.048
1:45.891 - debatably missing kick
2:10.454 - no note?
2:24.548-2:31.548 - repeat of 48.798-57.798
2:39.048 - repeat of 1:27.048
2:45.891 - debatably missing kick
2:51.048 - repeat of 1:27.048

My primary concern with this file is that the 24th light js sections (48.798-57.798 and 2:22.548-2:31.548) are so much more difficult than the rest of the file. There are multiple ways to address this, whether it’s to nerf these sections to eg. stream, 20ths, or to buff the rest of the file with more layering. Personally I think a buff to the rest of the file with a stream approach for the 24th blasts would be best. The song has a good deal of stuff that can be followed to increase layering.

This needs somewhat substantial structural work that’s too much for an FR rating. I hope you resubmit this!

Monument (T-Force) [7/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
>Jump = Snare & sometimes Vocal

6.048 - Should be jump.
12.610 - Should be single. No snare.
28.548/31.548/33.048/34.548/59.110/59.485/59.860/1:00.235 - Should be jump.
1:00.798/1:03.048/1:04.548/1:06.048/1:08.298/1:09.798 - Why hand?
1:10.548-1:11.173 - Was it intentional that 1:05.298-1:05.923 had more left-hand bias than this region here?
1:22.055 - Sounds closer to 1:22.079.
1:33.048 - Should be hand. Vocal + Snare. Compare 1:30.048.
1:50.110 - Should be jump.
*1:55.548-1:58.548 - Is this section incomplete? There were sections similar to this that looked more complete than this.
*1:58.548-2:10.548 - Kinda repetitive. This section is lacking on both layering and PR.
2:22.173 - Should be jump.
2:40.173/2:42.048/2:45.048/2:46.173/2:52.173/2:57.798 - Should be hand. Vocal + Snare.
3:11.298/3:17.298/3:23.298/3:29.298 - Should be jump. No vocal.
3:16.548/3:22.548/3:28.548 - Should be jump. See 3:10.548.
3:32.485-3:34.360 - Harmless, but kinda irksome since the vocals/instruments aren’t even increasing in intensity to warrant consecutive increases in layering.

>>Looks good for the most part. Be sure to recheck your “jumps & hands” and “24th bursts for missing notes and ghost notes”! CQ/FR* for some spots looking like they were incomplete.