Hyper Fiber World Spectrum (WirryWoo) [5.5/10]
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** Chart is exremly early. Other sections seem to have potentially different or multiple syncs. Notes will be given assuming ositz's sync.
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- 0:02.962, 0:05.438 There really should be 32nds here and not just 16ths. Its very audible that there are extra notes here. especially with 0:3.580 which changes pitch as well, making it extremely obvious its missing.

- 0:08.165, 0:09.576 - back 2 back repeated patterns here. I dont think its really needed, especially since the piano notes are different. [14] seems to be used quite a lot in this section as well.

- 0:14.506 idk what sound this is supposed to be, but its way too quiet to receive a jump. especially when you compare it to the kick right afterwards. you get a jump for a quite soft sound followed by a single note for a much harder one. I dont think there should even be a note here in general.

- 0:14.958 personally i'd like to see something done with these guitar flourishes. With the guitar being a prominent focus of the song and chart, it really seems like a missed opportunity.

- 0:17.498 There really should be a jump here. it would really add some needed pop to the section

- 0:18.844 It really feels like this section cant decide whether it wants to map the kicks as jumps or the guitar as jumps. jumps are just missing from this section when it really feels like it needs them. Take a place like 0:16.016 and you're clearly having jumps for kicks. or even later at 0:26.080 and they're hands now. You have a sound that could make a hand, or it could make a single and it just feels too inconsistent. Then you have large sections where you seem to be having jumps for the guitar which makes sense but then leave out notes like 0:15.487 which going with the current scheme feel like they should be jumps. This entire section just feels sloppy and unfinished.

- 0:20.168 missing guitar note.

- 0:22.197 I'm sorry but there is no musical relevance to warrant a 343.343 like this. especially since there should only be 1 note for 0:22.550 and it is not in fact multiple notes. 343 24ths quite honestly feel overused in this chart. it feels that anytime there is 24ths it has to be 343. It quite frankly feels forced. They're all different sounds and pitches, they dont need to all be the same pattern. I think you could throw in some 232 or even 121s and it would be fine.

- 0:24.315 There is a lot going on in the music here. instruments you were following, it shouldn't be empty.

- 0:27.138 - the 5 note anchor here really takes away from the melody going on here. I think it would feel much better if this was changed to a [24] This is a higher pitched note, so [23] feels like one of the worst choices for a jump. i think even [14] would work better, but [24] still works best in my eyes.

- 0:30.315 - Within 1 second time span, we have a kick represented as a hand, jump and single note. yes, there is more going on in the song, but quite frankly this just feels confusing. Its a problem with the entire chart. There are times when a note can be layered as different chords but this happens quite frankly too often, and jumps chords sizes too big. more consistency is really needed in this chart.

- 0:35.256 okay, but seriously why is this even a hand? its the same soft sound as 0:34.285. Quite frankly the chord choices just dont make sense. I'm wondering if there was lazy copy/pasting going on here as that would explain the extra hand.

- 0:42.844 so the flute here barely gets ant notes, but at 0:46.197 we get a full trill.

- 0:46.903 Considering the trill with the flute, you really should have the anchor continue past where it ends. It sorta implies there should be more flute when there isn't. something like [12]4[12]3[12]4 would work better.

- 0:49.727 another great example of the confusing nature of layering. 2 kick 2 jumps, then at 0:50.785 we're back to single notes.

- 0:58.021 0:58.727 and 0:59.080 once again all contain the same sounds and are 3 different sized chords.

- 0:59.609 Honestly this is the first section to really be consistent with good chord sizes. From this point on it almost feels like a completely different person charted the song.

- 1:02.080 I'm not sure this 3 note jack is really warranted. It feels overkill for the sound, and there haven't been jacks until this point so it really stands out. The 3 notes aren't all even the same pitch. It also feels like anything remotely hard gets put on the right hand, and quite frankly i feel like its a bit much.

- 1:25.844 REALLY watch at these bursts. There are many similar bursts in this chart that have too many notes. This should be a 3 note burst, not 5.

- 1:27.197 more unnecessary right handed patterns. even if you wanted to argue PR, the pitches are distinct enough that these patterns shouldn't repeat like this.

- 1:32.609 i get that you want to have jumps for the hard sounds (good job) but there are too many sounds here and not enough notes. Even dropping the violin which is playing 24ths, the drum beat here also has 24ths in it, so plain 12ths here is simply not correct. This is one of those times where its probably a better idea to drop the layering in favor of more notes for the music.

- 1:33.315 this section has more similar complaints that i've already mentioned so i'll be skipping it. just know issues are still here.

- 1:51.844 please pay close attention to the rhythms in the song. this sound should be 24ths starting from the 8th. It sounds like all the accordion bursts should be 24ths.

- 1:52.550 this is part of what i was talking about earlier when i said it felt like a different chart. Suddenly minijacks are a core element of the chart when they really weren't earlier, so it feels out of place and like a different chart.

- 1:56.785 Not charting the xylophone here (or whatever similar instrument it is) feels like a missed opportunity. Its has as much importance as the piano so not having notes for it make it feel like parts of the song are missing.

- 1:59.168 amusingly this should only be 2 32nds long and the 3rd note is a ghost and the 4th noet is actually the xylophone.

- 2:05.256 considering how the piano is the focus of the section i dont really agree with removing the 32nds to make way for hands. I think you would be better off just keeping the 32nd stream going and taking the hands down to jumps.

- 2:06.756 the trill should really start here.

- 2:07.197 considering how weak this note is compared to the previous trill. I really think it should be a single note instead.

- 2:09.197 why isn't this a jump??

- 2:19.462 the lack of notes for the extra percussion here seems like a misstep. Its part of what makes this section unique and the added notes could really spice up the section.

- 2:23.785 Random missing 8th

- 2:28.374 This random anchor on 3 really isn't necessary and has no musical relevance.

- 2:33.668 Its worth noting just how heavy this section is on the left hand.

- 2:51.322 Color theory here feels a bit random. This chart hasn't really used color theory at all until the very end and this is just piano notes we've been hearing all song. There isn't anything particularly special about them and they just feel out of place.

This chart Needs polish. Consistency issues are filled throughout and combined with the sync issues I just simply cant accept this. I wouldn't be surprised if you charted this multiple different times 3 months apart from each other because thats what it feels like when looking at this chart. I'll let the wall of notes speak for itself here.