Neon Dream :: FFR Batch Submission
jh05013 - Neon Dream - Artificial Fear [8 / 10]
October/November 2021
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Artificial Fear blanket permission.

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Neon Dream (jh05013)

Note Count

1386

Chart Length

3:00

Average NPS

8.1116

Estimated Difficulty

63.28

First Note

0:09

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 2

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

x 237

Hands

x 103

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
9 - 18.00 nps 1 Second
16 - 16.00 nps 2 Seconds
28 - 14.00 nps 5 Seconds
68 - 13.60 nps 10 Seconds
127 - 12.70 nps 30 Seconds
338 - 11.27 nps 1 Minute
649 - 10.82 nps

Color Count

x 726 (52.38%)
x 3 (0.22%)
x 634 (45.74%)
x 0 (0%)
x 10 (0.72%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 13 (0.94%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

5.63s3.2s3.2s3.17s3.17s1.77s1.77s1.07s
35
28
21
14
7

(posting for Pizza69)

Neon Dream
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- Permissions, metadata good.
- Sync is marginally early, change offset -0.725 -> -0.731. Timestamps given with these changes.

- 33.084, 33.260: I had a pretty hard time hearing these the first go around. They're there, but I might suggest de-emphasizing them a little--I'd personally remove 33.260 and move 33.084 to column 4 so it's not interfering with the column 2 jacks, but your call.
- 67.790: Could be a good spot for a colour gimmick (but by no means mandatory).
- 78.731: Not a jump, but 78.378 is?
- 102.372-108.019 etc: Wow these trills feel really really good to play. Awesome job.
- 119.672, 121.790: Why aren't these jumps?
- 157.437: I get this was a pretty guitar-oriented section of the chart, but completely omitting layering to the percussion (as well as the 24ths at 158.437) feels a bit underwhelming to me.
- 177.201: Suggest hand instead of quad, this doesn't feel more intense than the previous hand at 176.731.

- Good chart, jumpstreams are attentively layered and well patterned. Trill sections are extremely fun. Honestly kind of feels like Reminders, but with a more aggressive song. [8/10]

(gold stinger notes)

Neon Dream (jh05013) [8.0/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.

-Intro’s kinda long-ish.

-[00:51.548] Personally, would’ve preferred to see some single 12ths in here so there’s at least something to keep the player involved during this 6 seconds of silence but it’s whatever.

-[01:52.254] PR for jump here should be separate from the previous [14] jump or vice-versa.

-Song doesn’t necessarily bring anything new to the table, but there’s isn’t anything inherently faulty with the chart that should bar it. It’s just, extremely straightforward.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1383 => 1385
AVG NPS changed: 8.09403 => 8.10574
Hand Bias changed: -1 => 1

Thanks for the notes.
- 78.731 jumped
- 1:52.254 pr fixed
- 119.672, 121.790 - percussions here were too quiet for me. Jumps at 120.378, 121.083, etc. are from guitar.
- 157.437 is actually a percussion-only section. 158.437 was a missing note, added.
- 177.201 handed

A minor edit, but it's fine if this one is too late to get into the game. The only difference is a missing drum at 40.025.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1385 => 1386
AVG NPS changed: 8.10574 => 8.11159
Hand Bias changed: 1 => 2