[6.5/10]

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- 4.913: Missing note
- 17.913, 25.913, 28.580 : Missing note?
- 20.080, 22.747, 30.747:: Why the 3-note jacks? I would accept 2-note jacks like at 33.580, but please move the 8ths; the difference in pitch is way too apparent.
- 24.830: Missing 32nd, I feel including this 32nd would actually make it easier to play.
- 27.580: Why is this 3 2 1 pattern repeating three times here? It's especially weird because the 3rd roll starts a 16th late.
- 28.580: Missing note
- 29.080: Repeating pattern here again, but the guitar is doing something different. Just listen to the 16th notes.
- 38.413: Halving the bpm feels really nice here.
- 38.413 - 59.413: There are a bunch of missing notes here, you're following both the vocals and the percussion, but you're following the percussion very selectively.
- 49.747: I understand you're connecting the notes because of the 3 syllables of ''ste-re-o'', but they're a different pitch. I would just make this a [23] 4 3 instead.
- 57.247: I don't like this jack, ''the'' is in a way higher pitch than ''world''.
- 57.913: This one is fine and I like that's it's congruent with 55.080.
- 65.746: This shouldn't be on the same column as 'me', she's saying 'in' here.
- 66.413: This should also be on a different column than both 65.746 and 65.079.
- 68.413: This jump feels weird because there are no vocals. There's also a missing jump to a chord at 69.413, so I would put jumps to chord + vocals since nearly all the chords have vocals on them.
- 73.747: Should be a different jump because of different words.
- 77.413: This should probably be a jump, and I would put the 4th notes on [24] and these on [12].
- 78.556: This cyan jump should be on the location of the first 16th. (slow it down)
- 83.413: Making the 8th a single and the 16th a jump would make more sense here.
- 87.080: I'd make this a [24] to highlight the descending pitch of the vocals.
- 97.080: Pitch on the vocals is descending.
- 107.580, 118.247: Following your jack theory to the vocals, shouldn't these be minijacks with the 4th after?
- 109.913: Why is this a jack?
- 119.413: I sorta understand the reasoning behind this jack, but it feels really off to me pitch wise.
- 135.747 - 154.080: Jack usage is really hard to follow in this guitar solo.
- 149.913: Why is this section empty? If you're only following the guitar there are a bunch of ghost notes (144.913, 144.997 etc.)
- 160.234, 170.900: Missing white note.
- 177.011: Move to 176.911.

On the surface this chart is okay, I was questioning the jacks and repeating notes to different sounds while playing, but it wasn't overly eggregious or anything. I do feel this chart could be improved, because there are quite a few things I would consider technical errors.
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Destr0yer (Ghost_Medley) [6/10]
> Permission check good.
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> "feat. Nikki Simmons" Should potentially be moved to the Song title as that seems to be where it is usually placed.
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- The audio feels... Off to me. I'm not sure where you got the audio, but compared to other sources of the song the balancing feels completely off. For example the sound at 11.746 has absolutely no bass to it compared to other versions.

- 0:03.079 There is a missing note here, but a sound in the song. The same drum as at 0:04.413. I assume the note at 0:03.246 is for that screwdriver sound, but it starts a bit earlier and

- 0:15.246, 0:17.913, 0:25.913, 0:28.579 I dont get what exactly is different about these sounds that we dont get notes here. it just sounds to me like we're missing a note to me.

- 0:18.329 Missing 32nd here you might want to chart.

- 0:24.829 There is a missing 32nd here. This should be a continuous stream (or trill).

- Actually, speaking of 0:24.413, why is it so different from 0:32.413 and 0:35.079. They're basically the same sounds but this is the only one that isn't a roll. Its definitely the spike of the section, so also turning it ito a roll wouldn't be a bad idea.

- 0:33.413 This note should be part of the jack, this is the only time this sound happens and it isn't a 3 note jack. I'd suggest moving the note for 3, but it would be better to just move 0:33.579 and 0:33.746 to 1

- 0:38.413 The notes here just feel like a mess to me. Clearly the vocals are being followed and all the jumps make sense. But everything else is what confuses me. At first i thought you were following that tinky percussive sound, but then it would require near constant 32nds here which isn't happening. Then i thought it might be that sound which reminds me of cellphone noises, but then i would expect notes at places like 0:039.413, 0:39.746, and 0:40.913. I dont get it. I thought for a moment it might be the bass, but tbh its really soft and hard to hear, so i would recommend against it if it was. i Just dont get it.

- 0:57.746 I would like to see this, or the previous, jack moved. The vocals noticeably change pitch between the two groups.

- 0:58.913 This jump sounds like it should instead be placed on 0:59.079 as its a similar sound to 0:58.579 and i cant hear anything jump worthy on this note.

- 1:04.579 These notes here are quite soft, to the point where it might be worth removing them. With how the song is and the notes are charted, the expectation here would be to find more piano notes here which just dont exist. It took a few listens just to find the sound.

- 1:10.413 Counterintuitively when the song builds up here and the colors change, the chart actually gets less dense even though the song actually has more notes. If anything this is a another good reason to maybe go back and delete some of the notes in the white section.

- 1:28.871 Not a huge fan of these notes like this. They feel arbitrarily dumped, give some awkward rhythms and just dont feel accurate to the song. This for example could easily just be a constant 32nd stream. just 1 more note and this would feel a lot better but instead we have this weird rhythm here, and many other places and i just dont agree with it.

- 1:30.524 This rhythm is more accurate as a 32nd burst starting from 1:30579

- 1:42.579 whats with the 16ths on 4 here? There are no sound other than the constant 32nds that have been going on in the background the entire time. i think this would play a lot better if you just got rid of them.

- 1:43.913 speaking of 32nds, you arbitrarily start charting them here. other than the lack of notes i dont really see a need for them. i think its just a bit confusing and without them being charted in the rest of the section a bit random. I think you would be better off reworking this.

- 1:44.589 Please just get rid of this note. yes there is a sound there. its a bit obvious, but its the only thing happening in the song. everything is powering down and going silent. it would be much better if the chart reflected the pause in the music rather than placing the note here because there is a sound.

- 1:47.892 pretty sure this is a ghost note. I can hear a really fast grace sound coming off of 1:47.913, but not 32nd here.

- 1:53.079 a bit odd of a focus for this section but i get it. However i think the color theory needs to go. This is a pretty fast section for what is in the song already, and its even a pretty complex rhythm. considering those two, taking away the colors that help people decipher the rhythm here is just a bit rude.

- 1:58.079 These notes should jack like the ones at 1:56.079. its a bit inconsistent

- 2:02.080, 2:04.747 sounds like missing vocal notes here.

- 2:15.913 the jacks here feel a bit random, and are different from the start of the chart where there are no jacks.

- 2:19.579 missing guitar note

- 2:220.079 should be 4 notes here for the guitar, not 3.

- 2:21.163, 2:22.829, 2:23.829, 2:23.996, 2:24.163 missing guitar notes

- 2:25.663 no guitar here, i would remove this note and maybe 2:25.579

- 2:27.163 no guitar here

- Pretty much the entire guitar solo needs to be recharted. It has many more missing and ghost notes.

I wanted to like this chart, but i find there are just too many inconsistencies and strange awkward rhythms. I feel that the chart also struggles to find what difficulty it wants to be. sometimes we have sections with very tricky patters, while others will resort to rolls. Sometimes it feels like things may be left out of the song the make it easier, while others go full force with all of the sounds. The chart just feels a bit directionless and confused at times. Then add on all the errors, and i just cant accept this.