Criminal :: FFR Batch Submission
storn42 - Criminal - Disturbed [7.5 / 10]
October/November 2021
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https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821
this is a storn file.

✔️ The stepauthor has acknowledged the judges notes.

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Criminal (Storn42)

Note Count

1902

Chart Length

3:14

Average NPS

9.9425

Estimated Difficulty

74.49

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -22

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 352

Jumps

x 503

Hands

x 111

Quads

x 15

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 6

Color Quads

x 1

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
18 - 18.00 nps 2 Seconds
32 - 16.00 nps 5 Seconds
78 - 15.60 nps 10 Seconds
151 - 15.10 nps 30 Seconds
397 - 13.23 nps 1 Minute
666 - 11.10 nps

Color Count

x 627 (32.97%)
x 490 (25.76%)
x 1 (0.05%)
x 703 (36.96%)
x 1 (0.05%)
x 40 (2.1%)
x 13 (0.68%)
x 19 (1%)
x 8 (0.42%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.73s0.73s0.73s0.7s0.7s0.57s0.43s0.43s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1898 => 1900
AVG NPS changed: 9.92159 => 9.93204
Hand Bias changed: -30 => -28

[7.5/10]

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 35.004 - 36.157: PR on these notes is backwards, I think re-arranging them for PR wouldn't affect the gameplay/patterning too much.
- 45.821: Pretty subjective note, but I would've prefered these to be a different color. Pink + red is a bit hard to read.
- 62.551 - 63.705: I know you don't necessarily care about PR too much, but these notes are descending.
- 64.138, 64.571: Not sure what these notes represent, my guess would be the echo, but I can't tell. Suggest removing.
- 64.859: New section starting + drummer/guitarist going absolutely ham = hand?
- 65.436: I quite like these graces, they spice up the chart.
- 66.878: Could be a jump to the singer going ''Ah''
- 84.907: Could include this note it's kinda cool.
- 117.498: Shouldn't be a jack, [4] makes most sense PR wise.

This chart plays fine, a typical storn chart. Not necessarily the type of song/layering I would go for, but you're consistent in your approach.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1900 => 1902
AVG NPS changed: 9.93204 => 9.9425
Hand Bias changed: -28 => -22

35.004 - 36.157: PR on these notes is backwards, I think re-arranging them for PR wouldn't affect the gameplay/patterning too much.
- fixed

45.821: Pretty subjective note, but I would've prefered these to be a different color. Pink + red is a bit hard to read.
- done

62.551 - 63.705: I know you don't necessarily care about PR too much, but these notes are descending.
- Focus here is more on the guitar now being in the right audio channel than PR. Limiting myself to 2 keys there isn't much i can add pr wise.

64.138, 64.571: Not sure what these notes represent, my guess would be the echo, but I can't tell. Suggest removing.
- again, its the right channel guitar.

64.859: New section starting + drummer/guitarist going absolutely ham = hand?
- sure

65.436: I quite like these graces, they spice up the chart.
- :) I was a little worried i might have gone overboard with the graces but its good to hear it was a good idea.

66.878: Could be a jump to the singer going ''Ah''
- done

84.907: Could include this note it's kinda cool.
- I dont hear anything here.

117.498: Shouldn't be a jack, [4] makes most sense PR wise.
- Listening closely you're right. Sounds more like there should be a jack on 4 after the first note.