Amen Babylon 7
*19.350 some of the 32nd bursts before this border on questionable but this one is really, really aggressive. these are 362bpm streams in a chart that is otherwise hovering around FGO difficulty. Please tone this down, like making them 24ths or similar, considering this chart is 3.5 mins.
30.538 what is this 16th for?
33.356 IMO missed opportunity to really emphasize the repeated 16th snare until 35.519 here
35.758 burst is weirdly dense for this sound, even if it's just a jumptrill
44.207 omitting the 16ths before this is fine but getting rid of them at 44.870 felt a litte bit off.
55.478/55.644 shouldn't be jumps [or alternatively 54.815 should be?]
1.02.194-1.03.434 feel this patterning is quite underwhelming for how strange and aggressive these new sounds are
Next section up to 1.35.257 is well-patterned.
1.45.048 jump this lol there's a lyric here.
2.12.049 good, although the transition into a split jump at the end with the 3344 is rough, and would recommend [12][12] instead.
2.22.161 feel like this and the next should be same
2.50.851 dropping the 8ths between these hands here feel like a decrease in tension before the musical phrase is done, would recommend putting them back in.
3.18.847 this is really aggressive patterning on the RH for just a snare rush where you stepped an even more aggressive one as straight [12][34] in 2.11.055, would recommend toning down a bit.

Overall patterning is fair outside of the *. Otherwise, solid enough. It runs far too long to really be appealing to me, and it's not a whole lot different to many files we already have in game, but in a vacuum it's reasonable.

Trums:
19.351 - K, nerfed.
22.666 - Jump b/c Snare.
63.186 - K, removed.
68.086 - How about left column for the one sound type, and right column for the other sound type?

VisD:
19.350 - K, nerfed.
30.538 - Thought it was Hi-Hat, but now I learned it was actually Vocal. Removed.
33.356 - How bout now? Recheck 33.356-35.519.
35.758 - Nothing wrong here. It just sounds like a 32nd roll.
44.207 - The 16ths only appeared when the Kicks weren't present.
55.478/55.644 - Actually, 54.815 is supposed to be jump b/c Kick. Now added.
1:02.194-1:03.434 - These new sounds aren't aggressive at all! Woozy emoji.
1:45.048 - I rechecked the sync and actually, this vocal was at 1:45.130.
2:12.049 - Nerfed it into a jumptrill burst for the sake of better PR.
2:22.161 - K, changed.
2:50.851 - How bout now? Recheck 2:50.851-2:52.169.
3:18.681 - How bout now? Recheck 3:18.681-3:19.675.

For both of you, please recheck 14.544-15.000 and 36.910-37.200 to see if this is a suitable (not too easy, not too hard) pattern for a sound that would technically involve a mix of both jumps and 32nd rolls. Also recheck 30.953-31.450, 2:11.966-2:12.298, and 2:17.365-2:17.697 to see if this is a suitable pattern for an ascending jumpglut. Also recheck 2:04.423-2:05.418 and 2:52.825-2:53.483 for the same with the descending jumpglut.

I’ll finalize the song fixes after I get both you guys’ opinions.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2610 => 2627
AVG NPS changed: 12.62496 => 12.70719
Hand Bias changed: 0 => -9

reuploading for Finalize Edits Checkbox