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bbblow -rebuild- :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo -
bbblow -rebuild- -
onoken [7 / 10]
May/June 2021
PublicEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273002&postcount=3
Blanket permissions from onoken.
Simfile Folder Name
bbblow -rebuild- (WirryWoo)Note Count
1386Chart Length
3:39Average NPS
10.1937Estimated Difficulty
73.23
First Note
1:23Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -18
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 12 3 - 22 4 - 2Jumps
x 346
Hands
x 46
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
34 - 17.00 nps 5 Seconds
69 - 13.80 nps 10 Seconds
129 - 12.90 nps 30 Seconds
348 - 11.60 nps 1 Minute
651 - 10.85 nps
Color Count
x 576 (41.56%)
x 378 (27.27%)
x 9 (0.65%)
x 377 (27.2%)
x 3 (0.22%)
x 39 (2.81%)
x 2 (0.14%)
x 1 (0.07%)
x 1 (0.07%)
Posted at 3:06am on November 8th, 2021
Bbblow -rebuild- (WirryWoo)
>Perms, metadata, sync good.
>Diff sections focus on diff things (jump layerings may change)
00.491 - Strange to start the song with a yellow note, but at least there’s no Yellow Note Syndrome going on here.
1.241-1.991 - These four arrows should be 1324. Recheck the PR of the singles within 1.241-2.554, 4.241-5.554, and 30.679-32.554.
7.241-11.929 - I noticed that the “3-note drum gallop” here isn’t all 3’s. It’s more like ABA AB ABA AB ABA.
16.710-18.585 - The acid synth changes pitch in this last few repetitions. Please change the pattern.
21.585/23.835 - Should be jump.
24.585 - Technically should be a jump, but if it’s a single to prevent a jumpglut, then I’ll allow it.
22.429/25.429/etc - Just a suggestion. This sound really pops out during the melody. Maybe make it a hand or a white note.
27.585/29.835 - Missing jump
*29.929-30.585/59.179-59.835 - I’m sure you can do PR on this.
48.679-52.616 - If you’re putting singles on kicks on this section AND you’re doing “jumps = prominent synth, hand = synth + kick”, then make sure all your kicks are singles
*52.616-52.991/67.616-67.991/70.552-70.991/73.522-73.991 - Technically, this shouldn’t be a jumpjack. Right now, you’re doing A AAA. But it should be A BBA.
59.835 - Should be jump.
63.960 - Different pitch. Change pattern. Compare 64.241.
64.429-65.179 - Why the anchor on [4]?
74.929 - I see the jump layering is now on the guitar
76.429 - Should be single. It’s not part of the guitar.
78.679 - Compare 78.866. Both these spots are [23], but they’re two different sounds.
*80.929-87.679 - I see the jump layering is now… Guitar + Kick?? If yes, then 81.304/86.366/86.741/87.116 should be jump, 81.491-81.960 & 83.179-83.647 needs better PR, and 87.210 is missing note
*89.929-90.491 - Fix PR.
91.429 - Change this jump to something that isn’t [14].
92.647 - Missing note
95.991-96.538 - This entire slowdown is off-sync.
98.179 - Compare 98.554. Two different sounds, one of them shouldn’t be [14].
99.491 - Missing note
99.679-108.679 - Not the most flashy way to step this drop, but the mirrory/jumptrilly placement of the kicks “[12]&[34]” gets the job done.
112.429-113.179/115.054-115.804 - Why the anchor on [4]?
113.929 - Prominent synth = jump, prominent synth + kick = hand, in this section. If kicks are singles in this section, then this should be a single.
120.522 - Sounds closer to 120.554.
121.663 - Ghost note that’s supposed to represent the nearby two guitar notes?
122.179 - Should be hand (Kick + Guitar)
123.491 - Compare 123.679. Two diff sound, both no be [124].
124.616 - Should be single (it’s not guitar)
124.804 - Compare 125.179. Two diff sound, both no be [124]
128.554 - These three 24ths are technically three 32nds.
132.069 - Sounds closer to 132.116
133.897-134.085 - I feel like one of these three arrows should be a jump.
136.429 - Please cut your song up to maybe 2:17. There’s also that weird negative time thing on your intro, which may or may not create that MP3 Length/Chart Length bug again on the Submission Engine.
>>The PR is lacking. And more! YOU HAVE THE RIGHT TO APPEAL YOUR RATING. (assuming that your final score is 6.0-6.5) [6.0/10]
Posted at 8:12pm on November 9th, 2021
bbblow -rebuild- (WirryWoo) [8**CQ/10]
>Permission check good (Blanket)
>Sync good
>Folder contents good
>Based on https://onoken.bandcamp.com/track/bbblow-rebuild-2 or https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_1sHTklY2J8 title should be "BBBLOW -rebuild-" (capitalized), but probably not a huge deal. Other metadata good.
>Mega nostalgia hit for 2007, 10/10
27.585 - arguable for a note here for bass. Fine to leave without
30.679-36.679 - halve BPM here again (to 40) for max FFR nostalgia hit lmao (Subjective, can leave as is)
64.523 - missing note?
77.804/77.867 - 24ths like at 79.242
88.429-92.929 - there is some pitch change in this that's not really represented (Subjective, can leave as is)
92.648 - missing note?
95.929 - When I tried syncing this thing I got this
What you have might be slightly more playable, so mix-n-match with this to get to what feels best to you. DM me if you want my .sm or clarification.
98.648/99.304/99.492 - missing notes?
120.523 - syncs fine on the 8th
121.663 - guitar still sounds like straight 16ths here
129.210 - missing note?
131.929 - argue for 24ths up to the 8th here on guitar instead of the 32nd
133.335 - missing note?
This one could do with some touch-ups, but otherwise this file slaps. It hits that FFR nostalgia pretty good in the beginning and keeps going to a great new file. Excellent job.
**I'll have to push this to CQ specifically for a proper cut, remove the last minute or so of .mp3.
It's your choice, but I think this one would work better as a skill token on the original (maybe just AAA?) than public release.
Posted at 6:59pm on February 14th, 2022
No response back on these for some time despite CQ status, moving to Rejected so it doesn't get stuck in batch. Re-submit to one of the current open batches with fixes, and can move from there.