Bloodlust (Rapta) [6.5/10]
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33.240/36.440/39.440/39.640 - note for "voice"?
38.040 - 16ths like 25.240/31.640
41.040 - drum fill can probably be included
42.140/48.540/(and all repeats) - recommend including this 16th
44.540/46.940/(and all repeats) - recommend including this 16th (not quite as prominent as the other but would be neat)
53.640/(many other examples) - You can't seem to decide how much of the "voice" you're actually stepping. I'd go for all of it, in the whole file.
71.840/84.640 - I like this representation-y thing here, keep that

This may be a case where accenting the voice with a different colour would help clarify it and increase interest. Or maybe just the "oo, you're warm!" which... Thanks? or.. gross? I..I think?

I understand trying to make an easier file out of this. The critical drawback is how the drop just isn't very interesting to play in comparison to the start. It can definitely be improved though, and I strongly feel like some of the 16ths I mentioned above can go a long way toward that without increasing the difficulty much. Including them will still land this file in the low-30s-ish max.

As is, the file is somewhat understandable and the short length helps to mitigate my concerns above. However, on the whole I feel it needs too much work for me to push it to accept territory.

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