Full Blown Meltdown :: FFR Batch Submission
storn42 - Full Blown Meltdown - PUP [7 / 10]
May/June 2021
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Released
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821
Song is on the album Morbid Stuff which was released under Rise Records whom we have blanket perms for

Simfile Folder Name

Full Blown Meltdown (Storn42)

Note Count

1158

Chart Length

2:22

Average NPS

8.2931

Estimated Difficulty

64.32

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:04

Hand Bias

No Bias

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 184

Jumps

x 300

Hands

x 35

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 17

Color Hands

x 22

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
18 - 18.00 nps 2 Seconds
29 - 14.50 nps 5 Seconds
61 - 12.20 nps 10 Seconds
117 - 11.70 nps 30 Seconds
321 - 10.70 nps 1 Minute
535 - 8.92 nps

Color Count

x 629 (54.32%)
x 248 (21.42%)
x 121 (10.45%)
x 37 (3.2%)
x 11 (0.95%)
x 0 (0%)
x 21 (1.81%)
x 0 (0%)
x 91 (7.86%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.77s0.57s0.43s0.43s0.43s0.43s0.43s0.43s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1144 => 1145
AVG NPS changed: 8.18898 => 8.19613
Hand Bias changed: 4 => 3

Full Blown Meltdown
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- Permissions, sync, metadata good.

- 32.059-33.150: Other than containing the title drop, I really don't hear anything different about these vocals compared to the surrounding ones, so including them and them only is a bit jarring. 62.604 is a bit more understandable, but honestly I'm not much a fan of how you cherrypick vocals to follow in general.
- 33.423-36.968: These guitar triplets are much less distinct than the previous ones, and I feel that should be reflected in the patterning. Similarly 63.968.
- 71.466-71.890: This seems to be synced to percussion, but layered and coloured to vocals, which is really confusing--please pick one element to follow consistently here, or follow them both separately.
- 71.966, 72.056: Ghost notes. This should just be an 8th.
- 105.833: Highly recommend tactically reducing the blue jump to a single so as not to force a 4-note jack here.
- 105.969: "s" phoneme starts here, but "self" syllable is more accurately on the 8th at 106.105.
- 110.196: To avoid difficulty spikes and make this play better overall, I'd suggest forgoing the triplet jack motif for the duration of these 16ths (like you did at 108.696) and rearranging it to be less brutally right-hand biased considering everything else around this is also predominantly right-handed. Here's my suggestion: https://i.imgur.com/8gfQqnq.png
- 135.968: Considering this has a crash while 135.696 doesn't, I'd expect this to be a hand while 135.696 isn't.

- This file is overall technically competent, but I have some qualms with it structurally. It's weirdly spiky, with the only real difficulty-relevant stuff being the back-and-forth jack patterning and the 16th and 24th runs later on, and the treatment of vocals feels arbitrary at times. These two issues collide at times, most notably 105.833, where following vocals that are not that much more prominent than surrounding ones which are ignored makes things harder in parts that are already relatively difficult. [7/10]

Full Blown Meltdown [7/10]

Permission + metadata good
sync = good

-58.559: This is a 48th instead of a 32nd

-71.474: These white notes to the vocals are noticeably off
-71.474 -> 71.379
-71.610 -> 71.546
-71.746 -> 71.790

-70.646: Should be a jump like 70.236
-78.420: Should be a jump like 70.236
-79.034: No white notes to the vocals here? This part seems pretty empty

-84.696: This should be more than a single
-84.696 - 102.151: Since you're following the drums here, I think layering in the hi-hats would make this section more interesting.

-105.969: The vocals here seem closer to the 8th at 106.105 than to this 4th (I think the vocals are on 106.058~, which would be a bitch to read, but I think having the white note on the 8th would be more accurate).

-134.332: I don't think it would be too hard having a 3-note anchor here as well, especially since you have the pattern at 110.333. Kinda like this:
https://imgur.com/a/bOY5qwe

-135.968: Why isn't this a hand as well?
-139.787: You should move the beat to 139.747

I think this file is pretty fun, and actually alot shorter than what you usually step haha. There are some small errors that do need fixing, but the file is acceptable as is.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1145 => 1158
AVG NPS changed: 8.19613 => 8.29315
Hand Bias changed: 3 => 0

Pizza
- 32.059-33.150 These are actually for the background vocals
- 33.423-36.968 I honestly dont hear it. they sound just as obvious to me.
- 71.466-71.890 fixed
- 71.966, 72.056 yup, Think some time signature shenanigans made me forget or something.
- 105.833 done
- 110.196 I tried to make it somewhat friendly, but i didn't notice (somehow) that i ignored the guitar earlier lol. I've recharted the section to make a bit more sense and be more playable.
- 135.968 yup, idk why it wasn't already

M0nkeyz
-58.559 done
-71.474 fixed as suggested except 71.746 Turns out there isn't actually a syllable here.
-70.646 Should be a jump like 70.236
-78.420 done
-79.034 The vocals here are just talking compared to the screaming of the rest of the section. it just feels right to leave it blank since thats the feel i use for the rest of the song too
-84.696: done
-84.696 - 102.151, i've not exactly layered it in, but i've added some extra notes to make it less boring.
-105.969 already addressed
-134.332 With the nerfing of the earlier section, it would be best to keep this section easier.
-135.968 already addressed
-139.787 done