BiciwoFree :: FFR Batch Submission

M0nkeyz - BiciwoFree - Mekuso [8.5 / 10]

Feb/March 2021

PublicEvents

Released

https://ffr.fandom.com/wiki/Mekuso

Break-core

burst/hard chordjack pattern at 133.489 might be a bit of a difficulty spike, but I think it's not too bad.

Some of the fast rolls are expressed with colored notes to make the file less bursty.

Simfile Folder Name

BiciwoFree (M0nkeyz)

Note Count

2644

Chart Length

3:51

Average NPS

11.5965

Estimated Difficulty

90.59

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -50

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 186 4 - 274

Jumps

								x 679
							

Hands

								x 136
							

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 3

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
15 - 30.00 nps 1 Second
26 - 26.00 nps 2 Seconds
43 - 21.50 nps 5 Seconds
91 - 18.20 nps 10 Seconds
173 - 17.30 nps 30 Seconds
469 - 15.63 nps 1 Minute
765 - 12.75 nps

Color Count

x 1055 (39.9%)

x 854 (32.3%)

x 51 (1.93%)

x 481 (18.19%)

x 50 (1.89%)

x 30 (1.13%)

x 34 (1.29%)

x 22 (0.83%)

x 67 (2.53%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.13s1.47s1.3s1.1s1.1s1.07s0.93s0.6s

BiciwoFree [8.5]
7.655 Not a fan of this minijack; would be better served as 3 to create at least some kind of break between the more intense minijack passages before and after imo
23.012 for roughly the same reason, prefer this [24] to be just 2 - this sound doesn't need that level of intensity, and the minijack here undercuts the impact of those before/after
23.965 would suggest patterning this away so that this buzzy noise doesn't create a connective 3-note minijack with the following
28.724 if you listen closely, as this sound fades out, it actually pans left and right. Having these as all jumps loses both the information of fading out and that panning, so I'd suggest just doing [23]3232 instead of [23]*5.
45.631 ok I think this is really too soft to justify this :p
49.203 this on the other hand is well-constructed
57.298 no strong opinion either way, but do you want to make this [12] a [14] for this noise? softer than previous hand + this is difficult for this sound
1.08.607 probably could do with some color or something on this, given the rest of hte file (see 1.20.869 for e.g.)
1.33.250 nice
Next part is really well-constructed
2.00.155 very subjective but i slightly prefer to see the 4 notes in the melody here instead of empty space, even if they're offset or color-theoried
2.12.536 either 141 or 242 for PR
2.50.747 there's a trap here, this 8th is very slightly lower than the next four on 4 I believe (i.e. move to 3)
2.58.366 ^

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core

3.21.345 there's probably a better way of PRing these 5 ascending notes than to start with a descending motion; maybe something like 12314?

Very well constructed file; general nitpicks around minijacks that I Feel are a bit overeager and actually detract from the emphasis you want on the stuff that's around them. Otherwise gucci.

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Thanks for notes, didn't expect this to be reviewed so soon :P

7.655: Done
23.012: Done
23.965: Done
28.724: Yes, this is really cool btw
45.631: I dno, maybe I'm biased because I've listened to this song alot, but removing it kinda feels like I'm missing notes there...
57.298: These kicks kinda follow the PR and I don't want to mess with them too much, if it's no big deal I'll keep this part the same.
1.08.607: Done
2.00.155: I'm not the best at hearing pitch, but I think this is E, D, C, C# ? Anyway, I put them in.
2.12.536: Done
2.50.747: Oh nice catch, I hear it too now
2.58.366: This one actually interferes alot with the structure of the rest of the notes around it, I'd like to keep the jump following it as a 13, because I intentionally started all the colored gluts on 12; so I really don't want to make the jump a 12 as well, because it's a very different sound. I don't want to make it a 14 either because then it kinda messes with the idea of having all the kicks left and the bass right. So I'd like to keep the 8th on 4.

Break

core

3.21.345: Sure, done

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A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2646 => 2644
AVG NPS changed: 11.60526 => 11.59649
Hand Bias changed: -54 => -50

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