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Note Count changed: 5159 => 5162
AVG NPS changed: 16.0917 => 16.10106
Hand Bias changed: 51 => 62

Apetenodytes Disco Type.4.0 (mi40) [4.5/10]
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-[01:04.143] Fairly brutal transition to a trill here that requires a lot of focus for its length. Speaking of, not a fan of how long this trill section is with the same recurring jumps for each measure, but will let it slide.

-[01:57.631] Marking this down as a missing 16th, just for consistency sakes. Otherwise, will seem fairly out of place for the rest of the patterns in this section.

-Also, up until now, there’s been a lot of repetition specifically with [34] minijumpjacks, would probably play nicer if they were mixed up a bit, at least the [34] minijumpjacks prior to the repeating section here.

-[02:23.387] Missing 16th.

-[02:31.070] Right about here, the file starts to drop off in quality. Not arguing that quads aren’t in the right here, just that it’s a pretty heavy statement for the file using quads like this. Would be more understandable if they were toned back to hands. Small things here & there slowly bring it down from here, like back-to-back quad usage & some questionable jacks/transitions.

-[02:36.887] Would prefer the 16th here instead of the gallop 32nd here. (See 02:46.143)

-[02:40.582] Somewhat awkward to play due to jump spacing on right hand. Might I suggest the down column?

-[03:28.948/03:31.289/03:33.631/03:35.972/etc.] Didn’t incorporate the 16th here as a jump. Sadge.

-[03:30.265] Should be on the previous 16th at 03:30.119, not this current 16th. Re-check this section for other iterations of the same pattern, seems to reoccur a lot.

-[03:55.363] Not necessarily a fan of the down anchor prevalent in this section, but I’ll let it slide. (Same vibe as the trill earlier in the file tbh).

-[04:05.899] Right here, the file hits its low, and yeah, it’s because you dumped 24ths to vocals here under the same recurring stream pattern. Could’ve done a lot of interesting jump-to-16th mixing with rap vocals and subtle breakcore in the background, but it got dumped instead. This is ultimately what’s giving the reject for this file.

-[04:33.997] Bad transition. Probably would’ve been better handled with what you were doing earlier; Cut the last 32nd, use a jump or hand.

-[04:43.363] This entire section reads as lazy patterning since it’s repeating the same jump anchor for whole measures without any real consideration for 16th patterning happening here. In one instance, there’s swapping of 16ths. Next instance, the 16th is anchored instead, and the jumps are swapping. In another, it’s forcing some nasty one-handed minitrill patterns. Specifically in 04:57.411 being the worst offender, as it’s both utilizing one-handed minitrill patterns on one hand, and anchored 8ths with every other 8th being a jump on the same hand as the anchor. This is extremely difficult to control.

-Gonna be a no from me, mate. Roughly 25-30% of the file needs a complete overhaul to get in, and that’s just too much to put under CQ. I really like what you’ve done with broken stream to hands in the first half of the file, but the second half needs some work.