*Had to go back to look at notes for the previous version since no proof link was given with this 2nd submission either. Managed to find your post regarding perms but please include them with the submission along with maybe posting them before or closer to when submitted to the batch rather than a month after the batch closed. Also bringing up looking at previous notes because the issues mentioned before are in this submission as well, aside from the permissions thing:

- Not removing the sm.old file

- Not really following Pitch Relevancy, take your trill at 5.737 for example. 5.737 and 5.948 are the same pitch and thus should generally be the same column. Your blue notes at 6.160 and 6.582 are lower pitch than the sounds your reds at 5.948 and 6.371 so they should generally be in a column to the left of your red notes. And then finally 6.794 is a lower pitch than any of the previous notes so that note should generally be in a column even more to the left of the previous notes. Instead all of this is just a trill going in the opposite direction of where the pitches go. Another example section would be like your 16ths at 145.385: There appears to be no rhyme or reason to whether or not you step these sounds as a left to right roll like 145.385, a staircase like 147.075, or a pattern with a long anchor like 148.765. These sections make me feel like I'm not playing to anything in the song at all. 95.315 - 96.371 is another example where the notes don't really follow what's going on.

- Only layering one specific instrument at a time rather than a combination of sounds. Wouldn't normally be an issue but with how long and repetitive this song is, stepping it in this way also makes the file feel very long, empty-feeling, and repetitive. It looks like you tried to follow that suggestion from previous submission from 35.526 - 49.047 where you added jumps to the bass kicks going on but that's the only section really.

* Saying this without having the previous version of the file in front of me, but looking at what was pointed out last time and what was sent in this time, there doesn't appear to be much at all that's changed honestly aside from the jump section at 35.526 and of course, us having permissions now. Really can't accept this as is still.