35
28
21
14
7
3 :: FFR Batch Submission
storn42 -
3 -
Disturbed [7 / 10]
Feb/March 2021
PublicPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821
Resubmission of https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/batch_submission/batch/?id=766
Simfile Folder Name
3 (Storn42)Note Count
2156Chart Length
3:52Average NPS
9.3971Estimated Difficulty
67.45
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:03Hand Bias
x 18
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 1 4 - 1Jumps
x 393
Hands
x 181
Quads
x 46
Color Jumps
x 28
Color Hands
x 9
Color Quads
x 8
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second7 - 21.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
10 - 20.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
32 - 16.00 nps 5 Seconds
76 - 15.20 nps 10 Seconds
140 - 14.00 nps 30 Seconds
347 - 11.57 nps 1 Minute
608 - 10.13 nps
Color Count
x 1010 (46.85%)
x 651 (30.19%)
x 21 (0.97%)
x 281 (13.03%)
x 44 (2.04%)
x 40 (1.86%)
x 84 (3.9%)
x 4 (0.19%)
x 21 (0.97%)
Posted at 3:43pm on October 4th, 2021
10.346: Sync here is really throwing me off. Any verse like this with that standard Disturbed vocal rhythm, he's either slightly rushing or slightly dragging behind the guitar riff so they don't quite match together. Not really your fault as your notes match with the riff good, just that the vocals being there too make the playing here kinda funky. (As this isn't on you, doesn't reflect in the score, was just a note)
11.052 - 28.699: Not hearing enough distinction here to warrant quads when compared to the hands at 21.640 or 22.346. Both have, from what I can hear, the same vocal/guitar/kick/snare/cymbal to where the quads feel out of place when playing through on normal speed.
30.450: Lower pitch than both the previous (1) and (2) so something similar to 231, 241, or 341 would work better here in this white note section
46.345: Having similar issue here with the hands as 11.052, though difference here is on lower rate I can tell the snare is louder. Distinction is lost on normal speed though
55.521: And same here as well with the quads
- Why the weird switch between streamish pattern at 55.521 to just repeated (4) at 58.345?
66.109: Distinction lost here as well in sounds between the quad here and the surrounding hands
90.811: Same as 30.450
93.638 - 141.455: Same concerns as noted above in regards to potential overusage of hands/quads, as well as 119.049 not starting a repeated column making the (4)s at 58.345 look more like a mistake
152.924: The constant switching from 24ths to 16ths in this guitar solo makes this a massive difficulty spike to the rest of the file which is too much considering the length of this solo compared to the file's overall 4-minute length
170.395: Doesn't quite match the guitar
-Everything after when the verse repeats, the same notes as above apply regarding hands/quads, though the last quad is okay I feel given it's the finishing note
*Overall needs more detail put towards hand/quad usage as it currently feels too much, along with toning down of the guitar solo as the 16ths/24ths create a large difficulty spike that might be okay with a shorter length but not 4 minutes. Overall sync and structure is otherwise fine.