Lumpiang Shanghai Deluxe
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- Permissions, sync, metadata good.

- 1.454: This note's not very audible, might be better to just stick to the melody here
- 6.554: Personally would put more emphasis on the shorter gaps here because they're what sticks out the most from a listener's perspective, something like 1 1 44 4 11 1 42. Your call.
- 49.354: Suggest column 2--the previous jack was also on column 3 and there's also an 8th leading into it, so it's slightly busy in column 3.
- 54.554: Either this and the next white note should be moved off column 3 or the two at 48.154 should be moved on to column 3.
* 56.154-58.954, 62.154-65.754: ow. These are much tougher than the other jack sections because they put the jacks all on one column with only short breaks. Even alternating columns on the same hand (e.g. https://i.imgur.com/nCpg8Tb.png ) would make this a lot friendlier.
- 74.754: Would prefer [34][12][34] to avoid the awkward 32nd flam on the left hand.
** 89.154: This 32nd burst is insanely dense relative to the rest of the chart, please reduce this. Suggest reducing the hands to jumps and using a rolly pattern. I'd also reduce 89.954 to a jump myself, but that's less necessary.
- 92.554: Some new percussion comes in here, which gives a great opportunity to mix up the stream patterning here. My personal suggestion would be switching from 43241231 to 43241321 (e.g. https://i.imgur.com/7WeQLnT.png ) but of course feel free to play around with it.

- There's some nice attention to detail with the PR in the jack sections, I appreciate it. That said, the chart is unnecesarily spiky, and while the spikes make sense from a technical standpoint I wouldn't say they work well from a player's perspective. CQ on **'d note; the *'d note is not mandatory, but I do think it would improve flow and playability significantly. [8/10 CQ]