Frends ~A short story~

IDKW2CM · 10-14-2008, 06:03 PM

People if you are going to read this please actually read it, and no tl;dr (anyways why would you be in Literature if you tl;dr).
It really isn't a full story, but I think it has an interesting concept.
Also it is my first story I have made and wrote out of school.
Enjoy.

Thought up at 12:30 AM after drinking caffeine . Don't know where I got the idea...

My name is John. And I have lots of friends. One my of my friends is Carl he says lots of nice things to me and gives me colorings. Sometimes my frends are silly. Sometimes they go crazy and stand up on tables. The people are always stopping them but I and my friends keep on laughing!

I live in Aspen Springs and it is very nice here! We always get good food and get to watch television a lot! The people are very nice too and they take care of me and my frends. But I wonder where they go? At night they don't stay with us. Maybe they sleep outside.

One of my most favorite things is to do is to watch out the window. There are the people out there but they are always really busy and trying to get to places! Sometimes I wonder where they go and I will watch them from different windows until there are no more windows for me to look out of! But they always look too busy and I like it here anyways and I never want to leave.

In the mornings the people come to wake us up and lead us to breakfast. All them are nice! But Adrian isn't. He is a very mean and nasty people. One day when I was getting lunch at lunchtime and he spilled mashed potatoes all over my shirt on purpose! I was in line and didn't do anything wrong! I think he should leave Aspen Springs forever so everybody can be happy more.

One of the nicest the people is Dr. Cullen! She always talks to me about things and gives me a candy before I go to my room! Usually we talk about many things! My favorite is math. I can do math very good. See watch! Two plus two is four! But one day Dr.Cullen talked about something I don't like. She was talking about how much I am improving and someday I might be able to leave Aspen Springs. That made me very sad. She must have noticed because she asked what was wrong and I told her I don't want to go because I don't want to leave my home!

Then she sad too. She then turned away from me and I couldn't see her. I think she was crying. I wonder why she is crying? Isn't she happy that I am having a wonderful time? Did Adrian do something mean to Dr.Cullen? Then I went over to her and said are you ok Dr. Cullen? She sounded very sad and she said you can leave now to eat supper. I said I hope you get happy again and I will see you again! Then she just stood there crying and the I left.

I wonder why she is so sad all of a sudden. Sometimes the people are weird and act different then me and my frends. Then I forgot my candy! I don't know if I should go back. Oh well I will get the next time I see Dr.Cullen. Maybe she will have two candies for me and she will be happy again to see me smile! That be wonderful.

My name is John. And I have lots of friends. One my of my friends is Carl he says lots of nice things to me and gives me colorings. Sometimes my frends are silly. Sometimes they go crazy and.....

PS- Not being mean.

Cloud0005 · 10-14-2008, 07:11 PM

That was amazing.
Too bad i'm easily impressed.

Tater Tot · 10-14-2008, 07:18 PM

Nice. That was a good story, I liked it.

**dore** · 10-14-2008, 08:10 PM

Cool concept.

IDKW2CM · 10-14-2008, 09:56 PM

Thanks guys for all the good comments!!

**EnR** · 10-14-2008, 10:02 PM

Well, for some reason I don't get it o.O

IDKW2CM · 10-14-2008, 10:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IDKW2CM

One of the nicest the people is Dr. Cullen! She always talks to me about things and gives me a candy before I go to my room! Usually we talk about many things! My favorite is math. I can do math very good. See watch! Two plus two is four! But one day Dr.Cullen talked about something I don't like. She was talking about how much I am improving and someday I might be able to leave Aspen Springs. That made me very sad. She must have noticed because she asked what was wrong and I told her I don't want to go because I don't want to leave my home!

Then she sad too. She then turned away from me and I couldn't see her. I think she was crying. I wonder why she is crying? Isn't she happy that I am having a wonderful time? Did Adrian do something mean to Dr.Cullen? Then I went over to her and said are you ok Dr. Cullen? She sounded very sad and she said you can leave now to eat supper. I said I hope you get happy again and I will see you again! Then she just stood there crying and the I left.

I wonder why she is so sad all of a sudden. Sometimes the people are weird and act different then me and my frends. Then I forgot my candy! I don't know if I should go back. Oh well I will get the next time I see Dr.Cullen. Maybe she will have two candies for me and she will be happy again to see me smile! That be wonderful.

My name is John. And I have lots of friends. One my of my friends is Carl he says lots of nice things to me and gives me colorings. Sometimes my frends are silly. Sometimes they go crazy and.....

A man in an rehab/asylum place is has some thing where he thinks this is his life and it is normal.
When Dr.Cullen cries, she is disturbed to find that he thinks that it is a normal life.
But then he is really just insane because in the end he just introduces himself again.

**championanwar** · 10-15-2008, 04:17 AM

I really liked it. Very well put out.

10-14-2008, 06:03 PM	#1
IDKW2CM FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: SouDak Posts: 143	Frends ~A short story~ People if you are going to read this please actually read it, and no tl;dr (anyways why would you be in Literature if you tl;dr). It really isn't a full story, but I think it has an interesting concept. Also it is my first story I have made and wrote out of school. Enjoy. Thought up at 12:30 AM after drinking caffeine . Don't know where I got the idea... My name is John. And I have lots of friends. One my of my friends is Carl he says lots of nice things to me and gives me colorings. Sometimes my frends are silly. Sometimes they go crazy and stand up on tables. The people are always stopping them but I and my friends keep on laughing! I live in Aspen Springs and it is very nice here! We always get good food and get to watch television a lot! The people are very nice too and they take care of me and my frends. But I wonder where they go? At night they don't stay with us. Maybe they sleep outside. One of my most favorite things is to do is to watch out the window. There are the people out there but they are always really busy and trying to get to places! Sometimes I wonder where they go and I will watch them from different windows until there are no more windows for me to look out of! But they always look too busy and I like it here anyways and I never want to leave. In the mornings the people come to wake us up and lead us to breakfast. All them are nice! But Adrian isn't. He is a very mean and nasty people. One day when I was getting lunch at lunchtime and he spilled mashed potatoes all over my shirt on purpose! I was in line and didn't do anything wrong! I think he should leave Aspen Springs forever so everybody can be happy more. One of the nicest the people is Dr. Cullen! She always talks to me about things and gives me a candy before I go to my room! Usually we talk about many things! My favorite is math. I can do math very good. See watch! Two plus two is four! But one day Dr.Cullen talked about something I don't like. She was talking about how much I am improving and someday I might be able to leave Aspen Springs. That made me very sad. She must have noticed because she asked what was wrong and I told her I don't want to go because I don't want to leave my home! Then she sad too. She then turned away from me and I couldn't see her. I think she was crying. I wonder why she is crying? Isn't she happy that I am having a wonderful time? Did Adrian do something mean to Dr.Cullen? Then I went over to her and said are you ok Dr. Cullen? She sounded very sad and she said you can leave now to eat supper. I said I hope you get happy again and I will see you again! Then she just stood there crying and the I left. I wonder why she is so sad all of a sudden. Sometimes the people are weird and act different then me and my frends. Then I forgot my candy! I don't know if I should go back. Oh well I will get the next time I see Dr.Cullen. Maybe she will have two candies for me and she will be happy again to see me smile! That be wonderful. My name is John. And I have lots of friends. One my of my friends is Carl he says lots of nice things to me and gives me colorings. Sometimes my frends are silly. Sometimes they go crazy and..... PS- Not being mean. __________________

10-14-2008, 07:18 PM	#3
Tater Tot FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: The Fountain Of Youth, Florida Posts: 582	Re: Frends ~A short story~ Nice. That was a good story, I liked it. __________________ All images are links, click one and have fun!

10-14-2008, 08:10 PM	#4
dore caveman pornstar Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: ridin on a unicorn Age: 33 Posts: 6,317	Re: Frends ~A short story~ Cool concept. __________________ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IREnpHco9mw

10-14-2008, 09:56 PM	#5
IDKW2CM FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: SouDak Posts: 143	Re: Frends ~A short story~ Thanks guys for all the good comments!! __________________

10-14-2008, 10:02 PM	#6
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