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So I made a rap song
Horizontal Line (feat. Yasunori Mitsuda)
I've been toying around with raps lately, thanks in part to Kommisar. Tell me what you think. Last edited by Arch0wl; 02-20-2011 at 08:16 PM.. |
02-20-2011, 08:27 PM | #2 |
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that was pretty cool. flow could use more, uh, flow but other than that i was pretty dope
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02-20-2011, 08:52 PM | #3 |
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Haha awesome rap Arch0wl xd
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02-20-2011, 08:59 PM | #4 |
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lol this rap song
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02-20-2011, 09:11 PM | #6 |
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im pretty sure the aim was to be monotonous
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02-21-2011, 06:47 AM | #9 |
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haha this is very nice. I'd maybe suggest having a little more life in your voice? Kinda like eminem's sarcastic approach to lyrics. To be that monotonous you gotta be black :P
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02-21-2011, 11:27 AM | #10 | |
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i'm bumpin this shit on my ipod
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02-21-2011, 11:44 AM | #11 |
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Some of the words don't flow well, especially towards the ends of phrases. Kind of sounds like you used a program to say the words for you, especially with the monotonous speaking. Other than that it wasn't bad at all, I liked the instrumentation choices.
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keep it up man
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