Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 18

Mr. Bob · 11-8-2009, 08:48 PM

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Originally Posted by alexdestructions

this pack needs some kkrusty

No.

Dr Tran · 11-8-2009, 08:49 PM

i stepped some kkrusty for this pack though =x

N.T.M. · 11-8-2009, 10:39 PM

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Originally Posted by Dr Tran

i stepped some kkrusty for this pack though =x

lol My kkrusty still has two acceps and no further reviews.

Kraezymann · 11-8-2009, 11:04 PM

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Originally Posted by xferrarix

lol ok thx buddy!

i'm trying really hard to make sure its awesome since most of my files suck :O

**** no I love your files

N.T.M. · 11-9-2009, 12:34 AM

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Originally Posted by Kraezymann

**** no I love your files

me too

**i love you** · 11-9-2009, 12:40 AM

I'm currently working on a file for this pack. Hopefully my file will quality for this pack. Let's see how bad my file will be! x)

**jimerax** · 11-9-2009, 01:17 AM

well, I might finish one of WIPs for this too.

**revolutionomega** · 11-9-2009, 01:45 AM

Moar tonedeff plz xD

kommisar[os] · 11-9-2009, 08:11 AM

this pack does need mr.bob though

i mean more mr.bob

**Ntc2415** · 11-9-2009, 02:06 PM

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Originally Posted by kommisar[os]

this pack does need mr.bob though

i mean more mr.bob

ill do it...Where can i find that?...lol

dragoonhead · 11-9-2009, 02:09 PM

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Originally Posted by Ntc2415

ill do it...Where can i find that?...lol

You failed really hard

Rin-Dude · 11-9-2009, 02:32 PM

lmaooooo

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-9-2009, 02:43 PM

jimerax submitting **** yes

alexdestructions · 11-9-2009, 02:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Ntc2415

ill do it...Where can i find that?...lol

..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. Bob

No.

**Ntc2415** · 11-9-2009, 07:18 PM

LAwls it was a joke people...scheez

Mr. Bob · 11-9-2009, 09:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kommisar[os]

i mean more mr.bob

i haven't started a file since August or something rofl

btw can any of you guys post Icicles reviews for me

i've only seen two people say anything specific about it and i'm curious :O

kommisar[os] · 11-9-2009, 09:29 PM

it's already accepted lmao

it was chill as fuc

GET IT

**Patashu** · 11-9-2009, 09:49 PM

you saw what I said about it way back when it was for dcp2 right bob

Mr. Bob · 11-9-2009, 09:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Patashu

you saw what I said about it way back when it was for dcp2 right bob

I remember seeing that it was accepted, but I never saw any reviews or thoughts on it

Quote:

Originally Posted by kommisar[os]

GET IT

INCREDIBLEE

**Patashu** · 11-10-2009, 12:06 AM

okay I found it. if you've revised it since you sent it to dcp2 though this might be out of date

Re: (Mrbob) Icicles

Pos tby Patashu on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:20 pm
good song choice, nice and jazzy. I wouldn't be surprised if this could make it in. lemme go into the editor and snoop around

measure by measure breakdown: (these are all tentatives suggestions obv)
m1/m2: single note for the first beat of these two measures? your call
m2: yellow note just before beat 2 could be a jump (bass + hiss)
m6: first beat single note, for same reason as m2
m10: first note should be a jump. also in this 'chorus' part you could think about making snare count as two notes like you have in the intro. anyway the chorus comes a lot so make sure changes are applied globally
m16: if you're going to make snare a jump, yellow note after beat 2 needs to be a jump. also the last two blue notes could be given a minifreeze (to the hiss)
m18: I heard some extra 16ths at the beginning of this measure. beat 4 needs to be a jump
m19: has extra 16ths in similar fashion to m18. following earlier layering scheme, the last 8th jump should be a single note but beat 4 should be a jump
m20: should start with a jump. (if you follow the minifreeze suggestion in m16 do the same here)
m28: that gap in the stream should be a minijack with the note after it and also a jump (piano). also minifreezes to hiss again?
m29: last blue jump is wrong, but the first beat of m30 could be a jump. also just so you know, there's a yellow note just after beat 3 in every measure here
m30: the piano/guitar thing in the end sounds like it should be 48th gallops or something <.< idk I can't make it out
m32: why is the snare not a jump this time?
m33: second yellow note could be a jump, yellow note after beat 3 but NOT offbeat between beats 3 and 4 this time (it's just not there!)
m35: the 32nd triplet actually goes from the yellow note to the blue note, not the blue to the yellow after it
m36: if it's convenient, the two snare drums on beats 2 and 2.5 are each followed by a yellow bass hit. could do like 13 4 13 4. beat 4 should be a minijack with the yellow note after it
m37: imho take out one note of the blue and put in a yellow jump just before it (crash + drum)
m39: beat 3.5 should be followed by a 16th, on D say
m45: should start with a single note also imho yellow jump to the pianos when it comes up?
m46: should start with a jump.
m47: should start with a single note. the piano/guitar is playing 12ths here not 16ths
m48: start with a jump
m49: start with a single note. also, what's up with the layering in the second half of this measure?
m60: beat 3.5 should be a jump

11-8-2009, 08:49 PM	#342
Dr Tran Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1,134	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open i stepped some kkrusty for this pack though =x

11-9-2009, 12:40 AM	#346
i love you Live a wonderful life~ Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 7,313	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I'm currently working on a file for this pack. Hopefully my file will quality for this pack. Let's see how bad my file will be! x) __________________ =============================== The idea that RDCP 3 may come out in the future is a fun thought to have~ ===============================

11-9-2009, 01:17 AM	#347
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open well, I might finish one of WIPs for this too.

11-9-2009, 01:45 AM	#348
revolutionomega FFR Veteran Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: White Plains, New York Age: 32 Posts: 2,240	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Moar tonedeff plz xD __________________ "AW MAN, WE SUCK AGAIN!" - Rob Schneider, The Waterboy (1998)

11-9-2009, 08:11 AM	#349
kommisar[os] Banned Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Moncton, NB, Canada Age: 33 Posts: 4,097	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open this pack does need mr.bob though i mean more mr.bob

11-9-2009, 02:32 PM	#352
Rin-Dude Banned Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 87	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open lmaooooo

11-9-2009, 02:43 PM	#353
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open jimerax submitting ** yes __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles** (4key & 6key)

11-9-2009, 07:18 PM	#355
Ntc2415 FFR Veteran Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 134	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open LAwls it was a joke people...scheez __________________

11-9-2009, 09:29 PM	#357
kommisar[os] Banned Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Moncton, NB, Canada Age: 33 Posts: 4,097	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open it's already accepted lmao it was chill as fuc GET IT

11-9-2009, 09:49 PM	#358
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open you saw what I said about it way back when it was for dcp2 right bob __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

11-10-2009, 12:06 AM	#360
Patashu FFR Simfile Author Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: we traced the call...it's coming from inside the house Age: 33 Posts: 8,609	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open okay I found it. if you've revised it since you sent it to dcp2 though this might be out of date Re: (Mrbob) Icicles Pos tby Patashu on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:20 pm good song choice, nice and jazzy. I wouldn't be surprised if this could make it in. lemme go into the editor and snoop around measure by measure breakdown: (these are all tentatives suggestions obv) m1/m2: single note for the first beat of these two measures? your call m2: yellow note just before beat 2 could be a jump (bass + hiss) m6: first beat single note, for same reason as m2 m10: first note should be a jump. also in this 'chorus' part you could think about making snare count as two notes like you have in the intro. anyway the chorus comes a lot so make sure changes are applied globally m16: if you're going to make snare a jump, yellow note after beat 2 needs to be a jump. also the last two blue notes could be given a minifreeze (to the hiss) m18: I heard some extra 16ths at the beginning of this measure. beat 4 needs to be a jump m19: has extra 16ths in similar fashion to m18. following earlier layering scheme, the last 8th jump should be a single note but beat 4 should be a jump m20: should start with a jump. (if you follow the minifreeze suggestion in m16 do the same here) m28: that gap in the stream should be a minijack with the note after it and also a jump (piano). also minifreezes to hiss again? m29: last blue jump is wrong, but the first beat of m30 could be a jump. also just so you know, there's a yellow note just after beat 3 in every measure here m30: the piano/guitar thing in the end sounds like it should be 48th gallops or something <.< idk I can't make it out m32: why is the snare not a jump this time? m33: second yellow note could be a jump, yellow note after beat 3 but NOT offbeat between beats 3 and 4 this time (it's just not there!) m35: the 32nd triplet actually goes from the yellow note to the blue note, not the blue to the yellow after it m36: if it's convenient, the two snare drums on beats 2 and 2.5 are each followed by a yellow bass hit. could do like 13 4 13 4. beat 4 should be a minijack with the yellow note after it m37: imho take out one note of the blue and put in a yellow jump just before it (crash + drum) m39: beat 3.5 should be followed by a 16th, on D say m45: should start with a single note also imho yellow jump to the pianos when it comes up? m46: should start with a jump. m47: should start with a single note. the piano/guitar is playing 12ths here not 16ths m48: start with a jump m49: start with a single note. also, what's up with the layering in the second half of this measure? m60: beat 3.5 should be a jump __________________ Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker: http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1) http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

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