02-15-2009, 09:18 AM | #1 |
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A Very Short Movie I Made
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=prWuaYFV770
I had to do this for a class. I originally had a lot more going into it but time screwed me over. Tell me what you think, I guess. |
02-15-2009, 09:39 AM | #2 |
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Re: A Very Short Movie I Made
what
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02-15-2009, 10:19 AM | #3 |
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Re: A Very Short Movie I Made
Meh, the directors line seems to have been crossed a few times, composition COULD have been better but it's acceptable for high school standards. Also in terms of plot presentation... I'm kinda lost, is this about the kid disappearing after he gets knocked down?
EDIT - What was the running for lol, I missed dialogue at the beginning if their was supposed to be any.
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02-15-2009, 02:52 PM | #4 |
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Re: A Very Short Movie I Made
Everybody likes The Who.
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Re: A Very Short Movie I Made
I think there was a lot of running involved
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02-15-2009, 08:31 PM | #6 |
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i was just surprised your water fountain worked none in my school do :/
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02-16-2009, 10:13 AM | #7 |
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My college was new and the water tasted like pipes.
If you were going for camera angles and shots, then it's alright...but yea otherwise I totally don't get it.
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02-23-2009, 04:31 AM | #8 |
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Re: A Very Short Movie I Made
Maybe it makes more sense on drugs. Brb, taking drugs.
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02-23-2009, 09:21 AM | #9 |
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"And I ran......I ran so far away....."
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03-12-2009, 06:39 PM | #10 |
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Running has never looked less convincing.
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