06-17-2008, 09:15 PM | #1 |
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As of yet NEW SONG
New song, as of yet is the working title anyway.
I might change this later, but as of yet it's more of a soundtrack sound, fits the mood and what not. I tried using some orchestral approach do this song, unlike my normal electronic approach. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/151809 Critique, as always, is appreciated. |
06-17-2008, 09:27 PM | #2 |
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Re: As of yet NEW SONG
pretty good...but around 1:30 the string part that comes in is slightly off sync I like the ominous feel off it...some of the secondary dominants could be a little smoother as well...but overall good job ^.^
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06-17-2008, 09:51 PM | #3 |
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Re: As of yet NEW SONG
Needed to come back stronger after the slowdown. Key change or something.
If the drums are going to be so loud I feel like they should be doing more. Ends kind of suddenly which didn't really fit the song, IMO.
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06-18-2008, 12:55 AM | #4 | |
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Re: As of yet NEW SONG
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This song represents his interpretation of waves. It starts out feeling happy and joyful, because people love riding the waves. Soon the waves start to build up more, and become huge. A storm approaches, and the waves become disatrous and dangerous. After the storm clears, the happiness and joy returns.
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06-18-2008, 02:32 AM | #5 |
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Re: As of yet NEW SONG
I agree with all of blu's points, but none the less this still sounded good.
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