Bash Me

wickedawesomeful · 03-28-2008, 02:19 PM

Okay, I actually opened up FL Studio for the first time in months yesterday. I was just screwing around, and I came up with this. Keep in mind it's not finished yet, and it's really repetitive because it's just the build-up.

Salvage [Demo]

Critique, flame, etc. Thanks.

**dandandamdandan1111** · 03-28-2008, 02:25 PM

I think that it's good so far. Just add some diversity in the middle and the end.

Tokzic · 03-28-2008, 02:30 PM

where the hell have you been ******

**DarkbearX** · 03-28-2008, 02:31 PM

Not really digging the choice of synth for your lead right now, but that's just me. It also seems like your snare is cutting too much into the high-end (more so than your open hi-hat).

Other than that, it sounds pretty sweet. Hurry up and finish it! :O

Also, shame to know that you let your talent rest for a couple months, don't let yo'self get rusty. :O

wickedawesomeful · 03-28-2008, 02:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkbearX

Not really digging the choice of synth for your lead right now, but that's just me. It also seems like your snare is cutting too much into the high-end (more so than your open hi-hat).

Other than that, it sounds pretty sweet. Hurry up and finish it! :O

Also, shame to know that you let your talent rest for a couple months, don't let yo'self get rusty. :O

Thanks. And I've been busy with my band. xP

@tokzic: ily2 bby

**sleeplessdragn** · 03-28-2008, 03:48 PM

I think your lead is cutting into the mids of your bassline.

Manmademusic · 03-28-2008, 05:23 PM

Hmmm.... That's pretty tight dude. It needs some work, of course, but it's coming along VERY nicely. A couple things that I personally think fixing:

1. The kick.

Pump up the impact on that thing, man! The kick has PLENTY of bass, but it sounds a tad weak on impact and (perhaps) volume, the snare and ride overpower it a bit.

2. The high end synths.

While the bass and mid-range synths for this song are dang well balanced, the high end sounds kinda empty. Pump up the volume on the high end synths, or perhaps layer a string or short plinky-type-synth over them to give them a bit more volume.

That's about all I've got for now.... Keep on adding to it, I'm looking forward to hearing the complete version!

03-28-2008, 02:19 PM	#1
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 31 Posts: 3,888	Bash Me Okay, I actually opened up FL Studio for the first time in months yesterday. I was just screwing around, and I came up with this. Keep in mind it's not finished yet, and it's really repetitive because it's just the build-up. Salvage [Demo] Critique, flame, etc. Thanks. __________________ http://dozemusic.com/

03-28-2008, 02:25 PM	#2
dandandamdandan1111 the baker man Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: merryland Age: 30 Posts: 2,176	Re: Bash Me I think that it's good so far. Just add some diversity in the middle and the end.

03-28-2008, 02:30 PM	#3
Tokzic FFR Player Join Date: May 2005 Location: TGB Age: 34 Posts: 6,878	Re: Bash Me where the hell have you been **** __________________ ~very popular guitar streamer~** Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

03-28-2008, 02:31 PM	#4
DarkbearX Shimose Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 1,995	Re: Bash Me Not really digging the choice of synth for your lead right now, but that's just me. It also seems like your snare is cutting too much into the high-end (more so than your open hi-hat). Other than that, it sounds pretty sweet. Hurry up and finish it! :O Also, shame to know that you let your talent rest for a couple months, don't let yo'self get rusty. :O __________________ im gay SRL Page Castlevania IV, Super Metroid, and Cave Story speedruns D e e R F o r C e Leaderboards

03-28-2008, 03:48 PM	#6
sleeplessdragn ~Bang that beat Harder~ Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 2,321	Re: Bash Me I think your lead is cutting into the mids of your bassline. __________________

03-28-2008, 05:23 PM	#7
Manmademusic A.K.A. Stargame Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: That one place in that one town. Age: 32 Posts: 249	Re: Bash Me Hmmm.... That's pretty tight dude. It needs some work, of course, but it's coming along VERY nicely. A couple things that I personally think fixing: 1. The kick. Pump up the impact on that thing, man! The kick has PLENTY of bass, but it sounds a tad weak on impact and (perhaps) volume, the snare and ride overpower it a bit. 2. The high end synths. While the bass and mid-range synths for this song are dang well balanced, the high end sounds kinda empty. Pump up the volume on the high end synths, or perhaps layer a string or short plinky-type-synth over them to give them a bit more volume. That's about all I've got for now.... Keep on adding to it, I'm looking forward to hearing the complete version! __________________

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