My Song! - Cyan (demo)

**DarkbearX** · 02-12-2008, 06:23 PM

DbX - Cyan (demo) <-- Short.
DbX - Cyan <-- Full.

Yeah, it's not finished, but I thought I'd like to hear some opinions on it.

Any constructive criticism is nice.

EDIT: Added the full version.

**HammyMcSquirrel** · 02-12-2008, 06:28 PM

I'm digging this one. I especially like the white noise you have going on in the background. How long are you expecting the finished product to be?

**DarkbearX** · 02-12-2008, 06:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HammyMcSquirrel

I'm digging this one. I especially like the white noise you have going on in the background. How long are you expecting the finished product to be?

Thanks, and I dunno. D=

Quote:

Originally Posted by KgZ

It's a good generic trance song. Not much else I can say about it.

Hmm, yeah it's a bit straightforward. It's a demo, though, I'll see if I can add some uniqueness to it. Thanks.

nubbin149 · 02-12-2008, 09:23 PM

Not bad at all my good sir. I do enjoy it i'd like to hear the finished product

**Starshot** · 02-12-2008, 10:43 PM

The bassline needs less attack, it'll make it sound cooler and smoother.

Try adding some reverb on that highline, it'll make things sound a hell of a lot cooler. Seriously, reverb+highpass filter=Sex for trance.

Overall, it's not bad at all. I rather enjoyed it. You just need to make a few tweaks (trust me, there's only like, 4 you need to make) to the production qualities (reverb, EQing, etc) to make it sound fuller, then you got yourself a damn nice demo piece.

Edit: In fact, as I listen to the tracks on your soundclick, these minor tweaks seem to be the only issue on your tracks. Congrats! It took me a year to hit this point, it's no easy feat.

**DarkbearX** · 02-13-2008, 04:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nubbin149

Not bad at all my good sir. I do enjoy it i'd like to hear the finished product

Thank you.

It'll probably be done later on today or tomorrow.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Starshot

The bassline needs less attack, it'll make it sound cooler and smoother.

Try adding some reverb on that highline, it'll make things sound a hell of a lot cooler. Seriously, reverb+highpass filter=Sex for trance.

Overall, it's not bad at all. I rather enjoyed it. You just need to make a few tweaks (trust me, there's only like, 4 you need to make) to the production qualities (reverb, EQing, etc) to make it sound fuller, then you got yourself a damn nice demo piece.

Edit: In fact, as I listen to the tracks on your soundclick, these minor tweaks seem to be the only issue on your tracks. Congrats! It took me a year to hit this point, it's no easy feat.

Yeah, the bass is kinda loud. D=

I suppose it could be EQ'd better. I'm gonna work on EQing and mastering on the final a lot more than I did on the demo. Thanks!

**DarkbearX** · 02-15-2008, 03:35 PM

Bump, because I don't wanna create a new thread.

Track's finished. I guess it's not exactly what I wanted, but oh well.

Here it is.

**Arcsynth** · 02-15-2008, 04:32 PM

Reviewed via NG.

**marioGP87** · 02-15-2008, 05:41 PM

Loved it!

**DrugstoreCowboy** · 02-15-2008, 09:22 PM

honestly i really like it.

you know ive always loved your musicsssss

Problems · 02-20-2008, 04:58 PM

I like this a lot, and all that needs to be said has been. Keep making music, man.

02-12-2008, 06:23 PM	#1
DarkbearX Shimose Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 1,995	My Song! - Cyan DbX - Cyan (demo) <-- Short. DbX - Cyan <-- Full. Yeah, it's not finished, but I thought I'd like to hear some opinions on it. Any constructive criticism is nice. EDIT: Added the full version. __________________ im gay SRL Page Castlevania IV, Super Metroid, and Cave Story speedruns D e e R F o r C e Leaderboards Last edited by DarkbearX; 02-15-2008 at 03:46 PM..

02-12-2008, 06:28 PM	#2
HammyMcSquirrel Everlong Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Madison, Wisconsin Age: 35 Posts: 3,833	Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo) I'm digging this one. I especially like the white noise you have going on in the background. How long are you expecting the finished product to be?

02-12-2008, 09:23 PM	#4
nubbin149 FFR Player Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 303	Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo) Not bad at all my good sir. I do enjoy it i'd like to hear the finished product

02-12-2008, 10:43 PM	#5
Starshot /DJS\ Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Lamar U Age: 33 Posts: 1,794	Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo) The bassline needs less attack, it'll make it sound cooler and smoother. Try adding some reverb on that highline, it'll make things sound a hell of a lot cooler. Seriously, reverb+highpass filter=Sex for trance. Overall, it's not bad at all. I rather enjoyed it. You just need to make a few tweaks (trust me, there's only like, 4 you need to make) to the production qualities (reverb, EQing, etc) to make it sound fuller, then you got yourself a damn nice demo piece. Edit: In fact, as I listen to the tracks on your soundclick, these minor tweaks seem to be the only issue on your tracks. Congrats! It took me a year to hit this point, it's no easy feat. __________________ Last edited by Starshot; 02-12-2008 at 10:46 PM..

02-15-2008, 03:35 PM	#7
DarkbearX Shimose Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 1,995	Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo) Bump, because I don't wanna create a new thread. Track's finished. I guess it's not exactly what I wanted, but oh well. Here it is. __________________ im gay SRL Page Castlevania IV, Super Metroid, and Cave Story speedruns D e e R F o r C e Leaderboards

02-15-2008, 04:32 PM	#8
Arcsynth FFR Veteran Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: OR Age: 33 Posts: 280	Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo) Reviewed via NG. __________________ ex 1h, mostly spread now when i play <3

02-15-2008, 09:22 PM	#10
DrugstoreCowboy Is Famouz Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Michigan Age: 36 Posts: 3,409	Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo) honestly i really like it. you know ive always loved your musicsssss __________________

02-20-2008, 04:58 PM	#11
Problems FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 513	Re: My Song! - Cyan (demo) I like this a lot, and all that needs to be said has been. Keep making music, man.

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