05-11-2012, 05:27 PM | #1 |
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My first real song?
So I mean... I made this two months ago but I need some critique on it for when I make my next song. This is really my second attempt at making music. So yeah, one question:
If you could change / improve / takeaway one thing - what would it be. Thanks <3 http://soundcloud.com/vincent-de-la-torre/outofcereal
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05-11-2012, 05:38 PM | #2 |
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Re: My first real song?
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Extremely nice job for your first song! You've got potential haha The only thing i'm not a huge fan of is that WUBWUB scratches of a sorts at like 2:15 and 2:17, but you did pretty well with balance throughout the whole song haha. You're a natural! |
05-12-2012, 12:56 AM | #3 | |
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Re: My first real song?
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Thanks And yeah, I struggle with matching dubstep related material into what im doing. Thanks for your feedback!
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05-12-2012, 03:28 AM | #4 |
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Re: My first real song?
Posted my thoughts on your SC Waveform Great to hear new musicians, keep it up!
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05-13-2012, 03:05 PM | #5 |
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Re: My first real song?
I love your input!! Thanks man that really helps
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